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Reviews for: Time to Say Goodbye
Hesunohana
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
so great !!
moontoga29
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
I suppose I'm a tad late in reviewing this story, but hell if I don't.
Admittedly the latter half was somewhat cliched, but you wrote it well so I'm willing to forgive that.
Aside from that, this story was soo nice to read. I know 'nice' isn't a word we typically want to hear in reviews, but this story left me with a 'nice' feeling.
I really liked that your story was simple; you didn't try to make it any more than it was. They were dead, they were sad and they were in love. Period, end of story. Great job.
Lord Makura
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
That was so sad... I think I will cry.

Atleast I'm happy to know that Kanda will follow him...
Thought a little sequel could be nice...sniff..
Shikamaru-of the Dead
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
Damnit this made me cry... T_T But it was good too. :3
SeikaDragon
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
so sad...but I love it.
glon morski
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
Oh, so sad ;( I really loved it though. I don't read many stories like that which actually manage to make me cry in the end. Really a piece of art if you ask me. A story more than just perfect. I hope you'll write more stories like that.
olivia-yuymaxwell
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
It's sad but the melancholy is still beautiful! but i like their last phrase "see you" it seems that they would meet whatever the future holds :)
Blood Soaked Redemption
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
- momentary pause-
-starts crying-

thats so sad DX

its an amazing story.. thus me crying -points and feels pathetic-
but so so so sad D:
Onna Ran
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
T_T *sob*
ugh , it was so sad . .
I like it !
Erendyce
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
O_O
I simply loved it. I mean, I usually don't like char deaths, but since both of them are gone, I suppose it's better... Well in a way it was a 'good' ending, or at least not so bad.
And the atmosphere was well depicted, really a good job.

Oh yeah, maybe you wanted to say 'smile' instead of ''small' at the end of your story?
Aion Laven Walker
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
So sad... T_T

*sobs*

But they finally together...*sobs*
kikiyoinuyasha
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
OMG D: * cryies * WHY DX OMG OMG OMG WHY o.o did they readdy die or did kanda kill allen and was about to do that with kanda but the finder saved him ?? witht eh barries thingy of course xD anyway OMG this was so sad and i know i say omg to much xD sorry bout that anyway
Jester of Night
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
Aw. So... SO CUTE, sad, but cute.
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