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Little Kunai
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
i lmao! poor obito. he never wins does he?
chocolatte delight
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
This was hilarious.
I love Kakashi and Obito friendship!

Kakashi having bad handwriting is pretty believable too. Hahah.
G
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Pretty amusing. I liked it.

Three days left before it's July 7th. My foot will possibly break in half if you haven't updated SoI by then, as you said you would. ^^

Save my foot! Write the chapter!
Shunatsu
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! Oh man, this story made me laugh! Freakin' awesome fic, simple and funny, if you ask me! XD
RakeeshJ4
2009-06-02 . chapter 1
As usual, your Team Yondaime (has it ever actually been established that that was also Team 7?) dynamic is excellent, eliciting grins and a few chuckles from me throughout-not bad at all, considering the story comes in under 2Gs!:)
al3n3a
2009-05-30 . chapter 1
So cute! I loved the end with Obito writing sloppy and still having better handwriting than Kakashi. Thanks for sharing!
6tailedninja
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Ha ha, short and sweet, it was a nice story.
Linnorria
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
That was really amusing. Thank you for making me laugh.
SuperN-Gaspard
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
Nice one-shot.

SuperN
SkywardShadow
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
Oh, that was funny. Kakashi's handwriting is awful-who knew?
Terrific work. Funny, lighthearted, and very cute.
I loved the Team Minato insight. ^.^
The Elven-Spear
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
Wow... that's just funny
Lachwen
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
*snicker* *snicker* *snicker*
^^
Still laughing, the Yellow Flash let him have it. “Don’t forget to add ink blotches this time, Obito-kun,” he said between laughs.

Obito turned red at the comment, but didn’t reply, scribbling sloppy notes on a fresh sheet of paper. They were still more legible than Kakashi’s.

God...

Happy birthday to your puppy! Thank you for the story! XD
*giggles*
Lachie
silver-eyed
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
lol, haha, this is cute! i wasn't expecting this exactly but i like it! XD
Prescripto13
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
This one made me smile--good work!
17AutumnLeaves
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
heh, cute story, and I always like to see pre-gaiden fics, well done ^_^
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