 Kohaku Kawa 2009-05-21 . chapter 1This was really well written. I especially like that's it's in second person, that was a nice touch.
Some of it was kind of confusing though. Did you switch who "you" was between each of the ... breaks? I also wasn't sure about what the letters were.
I really liked how you encompassed such a large amount of time with short snippets. The title fits well too, it emphasizes the fact of their getting to know each other better. |