Well...you ask me for I review...but...i did'nt like your chapter at all. It's the worst of the story, seriously. I did'nt read a lot of passages because it was about girochi, miyako, corona and souma and they were very long...we don't care about those characteres. I understood 3 minutes of reading something i didn't like when I got a summerize with the last sentence of "Tsubasa is going out of an asylum"...

And, there is...a little...little thing who's bordering me (is that the right word? bleh..). You're religious stuff...Look, I don,t care about your religion or whatever you believe in, i just do not wanna read about it! Himeko can't believe in Jesus that much, you're not writting a Straberry Panic! fanfiction, she's surely bouddhist (i know there's a minorty of chirstians buut stil) it's it's it's...i can't express it. Turning me off?(not in the wrong way, bleh) She's gay..okay...you can tell that it's "wrong" without refering to Jesus or the bible...

I swear that i have nothing against religion...i just can't read it. In this chapter there were to many "things we don't really care about 'cause we wanna yuri" and...too less "yuri". Don't take it bad, really... i'm just a big reader and i had read maybe 200 fanfictions in many different languages of KnM only..so...well...you have done great chapter.
Before. Your fifth one isn't your best, you'll do better in the sixth one.

Please, don't stop writing...just...don't write too much about Souma. Please..?

Please..?

wow, new characters and fillers. tsubasa is crazy huh?? and myako is a real nun but dated him. hee i'm glad that souma and mako-chan are together already.

i'm glad that chikane didn't go off to much with himeko ;P but sad that it was a very short reunion. i hope chikane stays the night in himeko's tent...or they just move in together already! hee

If only Chikane knew... :)

No! You can't finished it like that! I hate suspense ! XD
It been some time before you upload, I was goint to forget the existence of your fanfiction! (And I read all 200 stories from KnM on this site. And those in french, too. Some in spanish, I tried) So please. You're one of my favorite (yep yep i'm serious) and well...Chikane and Himeko's relashionship will grow in some way (hate, love, friendship, i don't care)

So. hum. this is it. Thank you and i hope youll update soon. and...sorry for my bad english.

:D

Oh a cliffy, please write more as soon as you can. ^_^ I really like this story and I've learned a lot of Japanese through this. I like the fact Chikane has a locket, I like lockets. I've even made it my own little personal tradition to give a silver locket to a friend I may never see again.

you've got some interesting characters...okames? chikane is homeless too?? and who is that blonde chick in her locket?? likely not himeko since they never met or knew each other's names. and does himeko have brown eyes in this story?? hm can't remember if you've ever described them.

ok well, update soon! i can't wait to read more of C&H interactions!

Interesting, I like it so far. Update soon please. ^_^

interesting story, i'm very curious to what's Chikane's story. Hope you update soon!!

Keep writing!

Krysta

I prefer yaoi but yuri's pretty good. Keep updating and great story~!

Intreting I will be cool to see where the girls go from here, and it cool that Himeko already knows she is attrated to women so she shouldn't have to deal with a problem of trying to fight it.

ah chikane is soo mean!! what happened. man, these characters got problems! what's wrong with nekoko??

CHIKANE PAWA!
I was hoping for a soon update but it was worth it!
Thank you so much ^^

She's so cold...but so cool ^^ How Himeko will meet her again if she's going to "not protecting her ever"

Ho~
^__^

o himeko almost got raped!!...lol lucky chikane was there to save her ^^ hehe and yay they finally meet each other...wow chikane sure knows how to fight...so...is chikane living on the streets or something??...

hope you update soon ^_^

oh? i just notice, some of the orochi are good in this fic, or perhaps, all of them are..? hmm :)

and, nice seeing Chikane finally appear, and Himeko following her like her puppy too ^^

Oh...waow. I almost cried. I love the comparaison between the cats and Himeko. And they are friend? Unusual but still a very good idea...this fic reflect the reality and that's why I love it, seriously. No many author does. Hope you'll update soon.

Oh...I wonder how Chikane and Himeko will meet.