Absolutely awesome! So totally perfect for those two. Great job!

Fantastic! As we come full circle we get the feelings of an entire life time in only a few sentences. Wonderful use of descriptions to immurse us in the moment. It sent my heart racing at the end!

I look forward to reading more of your work. If there aren't already other Heero and Relena fics I hope there will be in the near future.

Each one of these chapters are great, I only wish they were longer. I understand why they are so short but I can never get enough of them this way! :)

A short but sweet moment. Very nice!

Fantastic! I loved the descriptions and imagery in this one. Just wonderful! So many good lines I can't begin to recite them all, I'd just be copying the whole story!!

A very nice beginning. Great descriptions that pulled me totally in despite the fact that it was so short. Can't wait to read the rest of them!

Aww! That's a very cute and clever way of ending it--doing it with the scene the same at the beginning. Thanks for sharing these!

This was great, loved it :)

Thank you for the lovely ficlet. :-)

Okay okay! I'm taking back what I said in my previous review. I love every part of it, so there's no sense in pointing out what my favorite parts are. Yay for symbolism galore! The analogy of the feel of the lemonade to their relationship is perfect.

I agree with Heero--for males (I'm not one),that kind of spectacle is such a pain. Haha! Hurrah for UST's!
I love how you stated that Relena forgives Heero his every stain of body and soul. My pattern for my fave parts of your ficlets, I think, is almost always at the ending line.

This doesn't fail to crack me up whenever I reread this. :) I love the description in your first paragraph, but not as much as I love what's going on in Relena's mind. XD
Man, I want ice cream. :)

"Accidentally" seek out that strip of delightful, easily accessible skin between camisole and slacks? Naughty Heero!

Amazing as always, because in such a short fic you managed to effectively let a little comic scene at the start flow into a promising drama at the end. Heero going away and silently promising to come back (or stay) is a common theme in fics, but sometimes mushy overkill in them makes them fall into pieces in the end.

I really liked this ficlet. You know, I'm not really a fan of a written Heero and Relena with established relationship already--a very fluffy and sweet one at that (no offence to authors out there who have portrayed them that way), but anything with well-written characterization is fine with me. Needless to say, I like how you protray Relena and Heero. The quiet atmosphere in this ficlet and the few flashes of angst in Relena's part makes up for a short but nice read.

Oh, Heero! *giggles* I love these lines:
"And then it doesn't matter because her face is blocking out the sun—no, she is the sun, vibrant, blazing, life-giving—and her lips sear like fire when they touch his. Heero decides survival and pride are overrated."

This beats a lot of 1xR monster fics out there. There's an amount of fluff in here that is not cloying, and the sexual tension is written effectively without having both the characters seem OOC. Most of the Heero-Relena fics I've read before that contains such a theme doesn't include a 'real' Heero and Relena, if you know what I mean. XD Thumbs up for this!