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IMSandEAMforever
2009-11-10 . chapter 12
Way cute!
BeanFlikn247
2009-11-04 . chapter 12
Ok so I plowed through Not Your Concern yesterday and finished reading this today...*whew* thats alot of reading, but so worth it. This is an awesome story, I am so glad that I came across it. The thing I like about it is that I have no idea what is gonna happen next. I feel like I am just along for the bumpy ride. Bella and Edward have issues, def need to work on communicating among other things. Jaspers is one messed up head case who seems to be taking Alice down with him at the moment but it sounds like he might be getting better. Bella is working through her pain which is good. Shes talking things out with Charlie and Edward instead of humping Jasper to death so thats extreme progress I think...lol! Rose being knocked is a breath of fresh air I think as the majority of fics that I've read have her barren and depressed and childless, so hell yeah pop out some youngens Rose! Thanks for this fab story, looking forward to the updates, ur awesome! :-)

Till Next Time...

~Connie~
all boys love alice
2009-11-03 . chapter 12
you might not believe me but i'm one of you're greatest fan and loved you're story more then the books of lady SM herself.
i was just to lazy to make a account ;).
well i'm serious you must be one of the first female fanfic writers writing a love story in wich the boys say/do things boys would actually do in real life.
congratz :)
dani7603
2009-10-25 . chapter 12
i loved the ending it was s cute the note and then the txt aw love them

keep up the great work
kkay33
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
i <3 this storyand im disappointed(in myself) for only starting reading it now...i loved not your concern so much, im having all my friends read it!keep up the good work and you're off to good start!
monika116k
2009-10-21 . chapter 12
I'm so happy they finally got some time together! I'm thrilled that Jasper is finally allowing Alice back in!
mariehs
2009-10-19 . chapter 12
Supercute ending! ;D Keep up the great work! :D
izzzyy
2009-10-16 . chapter 12
Aie lemony goodness on a dreary Friday at work. I think I love you, but you already knew that.
Random-Girl87
2009-10-16 . chapter 12
lmao. Thats where i wanted to end, so shut up.
Haha that made me lol!
And yes that was extrememly cute ending xD
Update soon XD
edward-is-my-life.fran
2009-10-15 . chapter 12
cool X
priinzeziita89
2009-10-15 . chapter 12
Aww.. the ending was cute... just a simple text can say so much!! =D Great chapter! ... I like the fact that Jasper's getting better.. hope they work everything out. And Renee's ashes at First Beach... i think that's nice too. IF it's a favorite place.. it's the perfect place.
dellatwi
2009-10-15 . chapter 12
ugh so cute your not alone on that count and hot asslemon goodness too! whats jaspers prob with alice? does he still have a thing for bella?
clancy119
2009-10-14 . chapter 12
i have goose bumps it was that cutely sweet : )

i am so glad that Jasper and Alice seem to be getting better as a couple... that made me smile when even Bella thought it was sweet..

when will tartya disappear ??
reds-red
2009-10-14 . chapter 12
Yea Kel the ending was cute...but I know that you are way deep in the graphic stuff and Pennylane_Art (which is awesome by the way)...so the fic might have suffered just a smidge. I like progress even if it is only a little (which it did have) at a time, but it seemed to lack detail. Don't get me wrong I am not a hater - I am one of your biggest fans and you know that shit so don't go there. I am glad that Jazz is getting better - it would have been nice if we knew more about the visit with Alice. It should be interesting when he comes to stay with the Cullens :D . Nice bit of lemony goodness thrown in there. The notes were really sweet.
Too bad you didn't post to lj some I could have used one of your awesome graphics girl! Until next time...
twiholic6993
2009-10-14 . chapter 12
i really liked this chapter
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