This... this was WONDERFUL!
It left me with a fuzzy, fluffy and very happy feeling in my belly. Actually, I feel as if there was a balloon inside me that grew bigger with every word I read.
I'm in love with Fakir/Ahiru and you really did a good job on portraying them. And I honestly believe that this is how the anime should've ended!! *laughs*
Anyway, great job :)

Oh, this was just too adorable! :D I loved Fakir telling in his sleep what he couldn't say while awake. And then writing the story that turns her human while sleepwalking. lol And the proposal at the end was just SO CUTE. (There is a surprising lack of fics involving Fakiru marraige in any capacity, so it was a nice touch. ^^)

This story is so adorable! I love that Fakir talks in his sleep. I just wouldn't picture him as a sleep talker but then again with everything he keeps bottled inside I suppose its not that surprising... Wow... Thank you! This story has given me the energy to go to work... Thanks! AhiruxFakir 4ever!

This was such a sweet, lovely fic. It flowed so nicely, and I think you captured Ahiru and Fakir at their WAFFy best. I loved the way you wrote about Ahiru’s behavior as a duck and the poignant/silly things Fakir says in his sleep, especially. Thank you for making my inner Fakiru uber fangirl dance with joy.^^

Con...congrats! PT was the second fandom I wrote for after Bleach as well, so it made me happy to know I'm not alone! But yours is much better. Yours is adorable and funny. I love it.

that was ace you are good :)

Blush inducing cuteness! I think you did a lovely job! I had a grin on my face the whole way, when I wasn't laughing that is. Thanks for the tail! (Shoot! A pun found it's way in my writing again!)

Ahahaha! Cheesy? yes. sappy? a little. hilariously cute and funny? absolutely! my favorite was that fact that Fakir loves chocolate-covered strawberries. that's so OOC! AHAHAHA!! good writing. i liked it.

this is so cute!

OH its been so long since ive done anything with Princess tutu i love this its so cute. this is one of my top 5 favorite animes...(T_T still waiting to c if they make a season 2)

THAT WAS AWESOME! I was just sighing in bliss in the end. What a good way to start my day off!

That was really cute, just as I expected ! I was very perplex when I saw you wrote a fic about PT... '' Princess Tutu ? What the hell is that ? '' I found myself watching it, I guess I just thought that you couldn't be writing about something that isn't worth anyone's attention, and I was right ! Don't worry, by the way, cause your story can't be more sappy and cheesy than the show itself... and fortunately, those two things aren't flaws, so hurray !
Anyways, great job ! Still such a lovely writing style ! =D
I do hope, though, that you'll be writing more HitsuKarin =O

Good job! You're making all us Princess Tutu fans proud!

This is really amazing for a first PT fic! It is everything sappy and syrupy and sweet. The only moment I felt jolted out of the story was this: "Charon sat Fakir down and told him point blank that Ahiru was going to be surprisingly fragile for a while, and if he didn’t want to lose her, he should maintain all the habits he had developed while she was a duck, including where they slept."

That just felt too blatantly fluff-plot-device to me and momentarily destroyed my cuteness-induced willing suspension of disbelief.

I don't care if it was cheesy and sappy and all those other things, cos it was BRILLIANT!
Keep writing Tutu fanfics, cause this was well i said it above in bold letters but I'll say it again, BRILLIANT.
Great Job!