Too lazy to log on, unfortunately , but I coudl'nt resist to comment , I just love this kind of idea, very amusing and could say it was well written,too - but about writing, the thing that most claimed my attention ( except for the pant's...I mean, egg...story's development, you see lol ) was the way you portraited Kurogane,Fye, and Syaoran!

Very lovely !

What in the name of all that's holy--

How...how did he keep the egg from, like, slipping out of his underwear? I guess it would work if it's briefs, but oh dear God I don't wanttothinkaboutit.

lol that was hilarious.
i loved it, so i think i'll check around for your other fics :D

So funny, I could picture the whole thing! Priceless!

I can see this happening. In the last, critical moment, Doumeki whips the egg out of his crotch pocket and beans Fei Wang-Chin in the sack. NICE.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh... you have just made my day.

LOL! And I had to think for a minute before I figured out who ugly sideburns was. Pft!

Loved how you made Sideburns Man meet his end. Just a transfer in location plus Wata's super-flailing-powers. LOL. And I could pratically see Doumeki's deadpan expression when he revealed the egg's hiding place. Great fic!

'He wanted to kiss Watanuki again, and do some other stuff. He wanted...
"Inari sushi."'


YOU EFFING GENIUS.

This just makes me laugh. And laugh.

rofl, i had to stop reading twice because i was laughing so hard. though i hope that will never really happen lmao

You uploaded it! Now the fanfiction dot net crowd shall be able to enjoy the egg crack!! XD

Seriously, even after reading it so many times, I can still giggle like mad with it...

I'VE READ THIS BEFORE. But even so, it's still hilarious and I can totally imagine Doumeki keeping the egg there. I mean, why not?

AHAHAHA!! Oh lol. oh lol.

This was absolutely priceless. *giggles*