Wow... It's so sad and really sweet at the same time. You really have a way with words. (Way that is completely taken away from me when I read your stories.)

I honestly don't know what to say...this story is so sad but so happy at the same time...I sat here and cried
you're a wonderful story-writer

Wow, what an interesting take on a "first kiss." :)

The mind is not everything--and the heart rules over all. This is a very sad and happy story all at the same time, and I like it.

This story is great! I can’t wait to read more.

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Either way, good luck with your writing!

Melora Brockert, SUM student

The feelings and atmosphere in this story are exceptional! I simply love it.
Thank you for this treasure.