 Zoooch12 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Once again MrDrP, your stories impress me. the attention to detail from the setting to the characters catch phrases is simply perfection. Thank you, thank you, thank you, for working so hard to assure your readers an excellent tale. Keep up the fantastic work. |
 Yluhve 2009-09-01 . chapter 1i love your story...
kim and ron are so not the drama :D
thanks for making such a beautiful story :D |
 PhantomWolfe 2009-06-19 . chapter 1Nailed them poifectly |
 Owl Emporium 2009-06-12 . chapter 1Haha, that was really funny. Great job! Haha, I get it...gellin'...jellin'...haha, clever. (: |
 Molloy 2009-06-09 . chapter 1First off, let me say that was a very KP device to force them to have a heart to heart. Ron's advice to MotorEd with regards to the brainwashing shampoo was spot on. I also liked MotorEd's decision not to goop up Ron's hair.
I think you did an excellent job of having these two work out their issues. Ron's reveal about the reason behind the Yori sitch was especially strong.
One little quibble. Kim's "diss" to Ron during Grudge Match. I so don't think she meant her comment as a diss although I can certainly understand Ron taking it that way. Of course, this might just be a personal bias on my part. : )
Definitely enjoyed these lines:
“Uh, the new do’s even more flattering than before?” he said weakly.
“Somebody has to earn those Cs so you A-plus types can benefit from the curvage.”
“Okay, that’s cheating. You’re using my logic against me."
Okay, I'm officially a doofus. I didn't even get the pun in the title until just now. |
 bigherb81 2009-05-28 . chapter 1Really enjoyable story there. That didn't make any sense that Ron and Kim never hashed those things out after that. I guess it's just the curse of the sitcom. Things usually wrap up neatly in thirty minutes or less or something bigger comes along to make you forget it. Nice job though glad to see they worked it out without too much conflict. |
 Darkcloudalpha 2009-05-25 . chapter 1Good story it fills in the gaps well =0 |
 Sentinel103 2009-05-23 . chapter 1Thanks MrDrP, I hope that they are on the same page now. That was a nice way of working through it.
NOw once they get out of the goo, maybe they can go out to dinner at some place that doesn't take coupons or have a children's menu.
Larry (Sentinel 103) |
 mkusenagi2 2009-05-22 . chapter 1Excellent.
MK2 |
 Danny-171984 2009-05-22 . chapter 1I think this story was made more for you than us. It is true that those issues were bugging everyone (and maybe a little more to you)but we need to remember that this is a cartoon too. Younger viewers might not get some complicated issues like 'going to college and long distant relations' and prefer the simple (or maybe forgotten) issues. But overall it was good.
...So Motor Ed got away...are they going to stop them? lol
Danny |
 JCS1966 2009-05-22 . chapter 1Excellent way to fill inb the blanks, MrDrP. I always feel like I'm watching an episode of the show hen I read your stories.
Now that they've cleared the air , maybe they won't have so many problems (besides "Clean Slate" and "Graduation.")
Looking forward to your new projects! |
 screaming phoenix 2009-05-22 . chapter 1Sweet, touching, and a nice fill in to the episodes mentioned. If the creators and Disney had as much dedication to superior storytelling and continuality as you do the show would still be on. |
 Joe Stoppinghem 2009-05-22 . chapter 1Man, I'll never ever not in a million billion years ever get close to the dialog and characterizations, (that's a school word, I looked it up!) of the KP universe.
I've said this too much already, I feel like I'm watching a KP show when I read your stories.
I'd say thanks but that just doesn't begin to cover it.
Thanks |
 campy 2009-05-22 . chapter 1Totally believable K/R chat. I love how you ended things without getting our heroes out of the gel. Does it really matter how they escape? I think not.
P.S. - Le Goop received; could you please now send me some hair so I can get some use out of it? |
 Classic Cowboy 2009-05-22 . chapter 1very nice fill in one shot. I was wondering bout those factors myself, and your ideas in this could have easily happened between eps.
Great stuff! |