Very good, I liked it. You portray Obi-Wan's anguish and feelings of worthlessness so well. I wouldn't mind a full length story, but don't force it if you don't want to =). Anyway, great fic!

This is a great idea for a possible story. If you do write a story, it would be interesting to see Qui-Gon's side as well.

*sniff* really sad story, but wonderfully written! i hope you're going to make a story out of this... ^.^

i like this idea plz make a story.very well writen

This was sad, however very good. I hope you make a story of it.

Omg this was such a good story. *has tears in eyes* Poor Obi. You should so totally make a this a story. or better yet make a story leading up to the events of this story and what happened after. That would be awesome! You are a great writer! Keep up the good work.

Good job! The song fits well indeed, and you captured Obi-Wan's emotions perfectly.

Great job I like it, very angsty! Please continue, I'd love to see where you take this.

Aw! Poor Obi!!

I like it!