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Reviews for: Not Out Loud
teacupz'
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
ah, really cool~ I always love fics that show out families great emotions and scenes like this, :3
keep writting FF, okay?
sugarapplesweet
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
I'm so ashamed of myself for not reviewing this earlier. D:

I think my favorite part was Lillia going through all of the things Sasha worries over because, not only was it written beautifully, it also showed how petty those things actually were compared to her own situation.

Good luck in the contest! I'll be rooting for you!

~ Peace and Love
farmermum
2009-06-02 . chapter 1
Poor Lilia, she has such a burden to bear. A touching piece of writing. Good luck.
Mage the Observer
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
Chilling, but thought-provoking too. Very nice work here, and good luck in the contest!
Starlight Amethyst
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
Aw, I really like this. It shows another darker, sadder side of Lillia that we don't normally see. Great job!

(Oh snap I was planning on doing something like this for the contest, too...)

:D
pisceanchic101
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
very nice :) although I'm still just a tiny bit confused about the last sentence when you say, 'and at the least, not out loud'.
Icefire149
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
that story was rele rele rele good! i loved it!
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