Painful.. ;_;

AWESOME! You showed the complete burden and tragedies that happens in Lilia's wee little mind. You showed her thought ruefully well despite the fact of the emotion rising up. The emotionlevel really intrigues me since the beginning was really welcoming too.

ah, really cool I always love fics that show out families great emotions and scenes like this, :3

keep writting FF, okay?

I'm so ashamed of myself for not reviewing this earlier. D:

I think my favorite part was Lillia going through all of the things Sasha worries over because, not only was it written beautifully, it also showed how petty those things actually were compared to her own situation.

Good luck in the contest! I'll be rooting for you!

Peace and Love

Poor Lilia, she has such a burden to bear. A touching piece of writing. Good luck.

Chilling, but thought-provoking too. Very nice work here, and good luck in the contest!

Aw, I really like this. It shows another darker, sadder side of Lillia that we don't normally see. Great job!

(Oh snap I was planning on doing something like this for the contest, too...)

:D

very nice :) although I'm still just a tiny bit confused about the last sentence when you say, 'and at the least, not out loud'.

that story was rele rele rele good! i loved it!