 Nicky Reid 1/30/11 . chapter 8lol, long live the queen, what a way to put Vance in his place |
 Nymphadora Andromeda Lupin 11/21/10 . chapter 8*collapses on the ground laughing hysterically. wiping away tears of mirth she asks, 'will there be more?'* |
 Cassandra30 8/2/10 . chapter 8What an entertaining thought! |
 Cassandra30 8/2/10 . chapter 7Most excellent! |
 Cassandra30 8/2/10 . chapter 6Good for Ziva! Good for Hannah! Get that guy! |
 Cassandra30 8/2/10 . chapter 5What a beautiful innuendo! Woot! Kill that Eli David! |
 Cassandra30 8/2/10 . chapter 4Most excellent! |
 Cassandra30 8/2/10 . chapter 3Oops! Truth has a way of coming out. |
 Cassandra30 8/2/10 . chapter 2Woot! I can really see Ziva doing this under those circumstances. Great realism here. |
 Cassandra30 8/2/10 . chapter 1Superb start! Totally wonderful story idea! |
 FairyQueenOfSparks 5/11/10 . chapter 8Awesome. So great. I love the way that Jen kicked Vance's ass out of HER office. Please update soon. |
 ncis29 2/26/10 . chapter 8YAY! GOOD PEOPLE ARE BACK AND VANCE IS GONE! was that the end? i wasnt sure..if so maybe a sequel? |
 power214063 2/25/10 . chapter 8is this story going to be updated? |
 AlenaMai 2/17/10 . chapter 8OMG! in one of my fics, actulally two of them, I reurected Ari, Kate and Jenny. It's really hard and you've made this story amazing.
I think the Kelly/McGee pairing is a good idea, instead of Tony/Kelly.
really |
 DallasSteele 1/18/10 . chapter 8God what a twisted tale of intrege and ghosts.
that last line said it all Long live the Queen of NCIS Jenny Shepard.
Keep up the great work
Laura Steele |