Hey, dearie! i loved it, its really hard to capture the real essence of Edward's mind, you did a great job!

GREAT!

Poor tormented Edward!

AW... that was just wonderfully written... but horribly sad... OMG! I just want to go to my room and cry all day long... great work..

T.T

nice, very sad :(

W-O-W! You are a great writer...you totally seem to understand Edward's mind(not a easy task!) Please continue this! I love it...