how can they NOT believe him, hell it's Zidane!! as if he would lie!! oh well he would but only if it's for the sake of a woman or flirting(shrug)

thank you please continue soon

Very nice chapter, kinda sad but still nice. Garnet and the others better get their heads on straight soon i hope. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Brilliant Story! Update Soon!

AWESOME!
Kuja's back! And better than ever.
Poor Fratley... ouch.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Your reviewer count just went up!
This is great, i actually wread the whole thing in one sitting! I couldn't stop reading. Keep going, the story is looking great! ;)

That was a truly amazing fight scene! And now Ares is back.
YAY!! More plot development! What are Zidane and Fratley gonna do? I can't wait to find out! Keep goin'!!

Wow.
That. Was. AMAZING!
Total action! I loved it!
How's Zidane gonna fight that Behemoth? Is that girl he saved in any way significant to the storyline? Why are people running about in the streets during the hunt anyway?

Update soon! Seriously.

Ohh. What happens next? I can't wait. Update! Please?

Well, that was interesting.
Quina saved the day, and Amarant found out what Zidane had been up to. Warm and fuzzies all around. Not really.

You're still goin' good. Keep it up!

ARES LIVES! YAY!
Oh...wait. That's bad. But still, plot development! Yay!

Also, Dagger and Zidane danced. DOUBLE YAY!!

Keep it up!

Questions, questions, questions.
Is Zidane ever gonna tell the others about Ares? Is Ares really dead? Why is Dagger married to that wannabe tyrant? Doesn't she still love Zidane? Why do Quina and Queldo hate each other? How will Zidane do in the Festival of the Hunt?

I wanna know! Keep goin'!

Wow... you're really flying through this. I'm impressed.

Okay, quick question: How can Garnet stand having that pompous, no-good 'goes through a long list of words that aren't appropriate for the ears of young children'? Garnet just doesn't seem the type to be that subservient. What's goin' on?

Nice little side-plot with Quina and Queldo.

Update soon. You're doin' great.

Interesting...

I really don't like that Harold guy. And it's not just because he's married to Garnet instead of Zidane. 'pouts for a moment' How can Garnet like HIM?! I smell somethin' fishy...

On another note: I don't think Ares is really dead. Is he or not?

The story is really goin' good. Keep it rollin'!

WHAT?!
I mean, I had a feeling about it, but still...
WHY?!

As ** off as the thought of Garnet being married to someone else makes me... you have peaked my interest. Where is this gonna go?
Update soon. Please.

WHAT doesn't Zidane know? You're really enjoying holding this over my head, aren't you? 'sighs dramatically' Anyway, update soon, 'kay? You're doin' great!