|Reviews for Two Hawks Hunting|
| Guest 5/10/13 . chapter 34
I know, reviewing on a completed story won't make a difference in the story... but I had to say - YES! Good Vera!
| Pavitra 4/25/13 . chapter 29
This chapter has made me cry, after a long time.
This ritual reminds me of another one, with similar results I had.
It invoked the blessing of Ma Kali the All-mother(in her "rage" form) to burn all evil inside...it really worked for me too.
PS: I'm Hindu.
| Ryvaken Lucius Tadrya 4/22/13 . chapter 9
Welp, this is what you get for flying as birds when speed is your ally. Broomsticks are faster. Apparating is faster. An airplane would be faster. A fire network would be faster but more likely to be observed or logged.
| oreomonstar 4/21/13 . chapter 63
Have you posted a sequel yet? I'm sorry for asking if you leafy did, but I just can't find them! If you haven't, though... Well, SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! ... Please?
| lilyginnyrose 4/7/13 . chapter 41
yeey, that will teach the old bastard
| lilyginnyrose 4/7/13 . chapter 22
what the hell, harry! what are you thinking! why didn't you talk about this with snape?!
please, stop those cliffhangers, even though I read this story finished and don't have to wait for the next part, it is still frustrating.
| lovingsiri 4/1/13 . chapter 63
I just finished this story and I know its a few years late but this world was amazing. You are an excellent writer and you should do it professionally, if you don't already. I'm not sure if you made another sequel, but if you haven't you should!
| saiyasith1 3/23/13 . chapter 63
Excellent story! I am so glad to have read it. I hope you do a sequel! This has been a great story all around. Wonderful work!
| TheWolfsMoon1331 3/13/13 . chapter 63
Hey :) - Just wanted to say that I absolutely adore this story along with all of your other stories :) - I love the idea of Harry and Severus being father and son and I love animagus - This story is the perfect mix of both with a great plot added in :D - I really hope you do a sequel - I need to know Sev is happy with Thea! (he deserves it) :) - I am slowly but surely making my way through your stories...
| aptteach123 3/9/13 . chapter 63
This was such a great series! I loved it so much. I wish you would do a sequel as I really want to see how Snape is as a Headmaster, and how Harry and Sasha/Meadowsweet deal with living at Hogwarts.
| Sweet Bitter Life 3/3/13 . chapter 63
Please! I want to read a sequel to this! It was so good! I love it! I want to know what will happen in the new school year. What will happen with Harry and Sasha and Sev and Thea? They deserve a much detailed happy ending! And how will the students adjust to the "new" Hogwarts? This was brilliant, meaning you are brilliant! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
(Sorry for my child-like rant)
| Guest 3/2/13 . chapter 63
really enjoyed reading - thanks.
| Guest 3/2/13 . chapter 58
the sea would be pretty chilly to swim in...
| Griffin Raven 2/27/13 . chapter 63
Wow...absolutely wicked that Harry finally gets not only a family of a father but also a grandfather as well! I especially loved it when Severus threw a surprise 16th birthday party for Harry and managed to get all of Harry's friends along with those he considers family...bet Harry would have produced a brilliant patronous that day if he'd have tried to do so!
I'd definitely love to read about whether or not Harry & Meadowsweet did finally seal there love for each other...and just how far Ginny Weasley would go in order to try & win
Harry from Meadowsweet? Will Severus be able to ask Thea McGonagall for a second chance or will she ask him? How will the students react to the new policies & classes introduced by Headmaster Snape...more important how will the students react to his
promotion? Just who will be his deputy...because I've kinda forgotten if it was decided?
Plus it would be fun to read about what other scrapes Albus would be able to get into?
Perhaps Hogwarts should offer more courses or qualifications that would be acceptable in
the muggle world...because once a muggleborn reaches 11yrs they totally disappear from
the muggle education system thus making it hard for them to ever get a job or seek
further education unless they use fake documents? Or introduce some sort of games night
to include both magical & muggle games & also include muggle sports...alternatively
some form of physical education, literature & especially for Severus grammar & writing
classes (for 1st Yrs!).
| Griffin Raven 2/19/13 . chapter 38
I can hardly wait to learn just what might have gone wrong during the nasty dark ritual that Bella, Lucius & Narcissa untook to return Voldemort to the new body that they had made for him along with Albus's blood & magic...something tells me that they have not fully understood the ancient magic that they used? Nor the fact that Albus willingly did
surrender his magic because I'm guessing that this might turn out to be Voldemort's achillies heel? Either way I'm looking forward to when the rescuers finally get down into
Hogwarts catacombs & with the aid of Vera the snake find the four children & Albus...but
mostly I do hope that all the death eaters along with Voldemort do finally get what has been long owed to them!