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KittyBlue
2009-09-21 . chapter 2
this might be the oldest trick on the book but it's still the hottest!
dumb naruto should have just jumped him... *drools* i would have! XD
.. but that would have ended the story right? we can let that happen! :3
can't wait to see what sasuke is planning to do next. update soon please!
Chadyz
2009-08-30 . chapter 2
That was really fun reading!
Well, I don't know if someone already suggested these, but I was thinking about two situations :
1- Naruto or Sasuke get sick, the other has to watch him.
2- Somehow, one of them gets under the effect of an aphrodisiac...
So...here it is!
Hope to read more next time, perhaps I'll have more cliché idea ^^
Selvatori
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
Sasuke's chasing Naruto...? Ahh~ the joy of fanfiction <3

Now let's see, accidently roommates, spin the bottle, truth or dare, together for a week long mission... what else... cross-dressing missions (Ouch! this one hurts~) =P
OhHowFluffyYouAre
2009-07-30 . chapter 2
Haha, that was absolutely hilarious XD
The old popsicle-eating trick.
Too bad it didn't work.
Poor Sasuke.
Looks like it's bad to the drawing board for him.
Can't wait for the next update!
Natsukimpd
2009-07-30 . chapter 2
thats funny god cant wait for the next chapter
Natsukimpd
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
that's a nice way of getting reviews maybe if you fix the summery then more people will read and give you ideas for the next chapter honestly i cant wait to see how this turns out itl all those short one shots put to getter in one hilarious story with lmao situations. er i cant think of any other situtions for narusasu right now exept maybe if sasuke spills ramen on himself while wearing a towel
xXMewzikLuverXx
2009-07-29 . chapter 2
nice fic so far.
update when you can. :)
PinkPandaClaws
2009-07-28 . chapter 2
haha. That's funny. I tried doing the popsicle trick on my boyfriend once and the attempt went just has horribly as Sasukes.

Some cliques that come to mind are
-hot springs
-having to share a bed because a lack of a spare one
Little.Miss.Smiles.
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
haha I like it! ^-^

well, i dont know if this'll fit bit:
1) Whenever Sasuke thinks Naruto is looking, he will throw back his hair and run a hand through it and sigh as if its hot outside and flex his muscles while doing so. lol
2) Whenever Naruto's around, Sasuke will drop something and try to 'sensually' pick it up -.^
3) Sasuke will be the 'Damsel in Distress' to some silly plan he made up and try to get Naruto to save him hahaha ^_^
Just cause Sasuke might be vain enough to do it ^.^
Belle Mort 13
2009-07-28 . chapter 2
snigger

god naruto is smooth in this fic!
Sour Queen
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
Ahaha, try the "waits for a day to rain and then tries to get Naru-chan to share an umbrella with him."

In the worst story Sasuke accidentally trashes his umbrella but somehow they still fell in love, so un-realistic. :/
carpe0omnius
2009-07-02 . chapter 2
lol Very funny!
Can't wait to read more.
Mantineus
2009-06-19 . chapter 2
Hahahahaha(still laughing at the Lee joke)!

Man, where did you come up with that? So random!-hahaha!

Great chapter; I can't wait to see what else you're gonna do!
jokerisdabest
2009-06-11 . chapter 2
tetehahahehe i like ur story..if u want some suggestions here they are-
*Sasuke dresses as a girl or wears leather
*Sasuke tries to show naruto his 'package' as the hot springs/spa place
*Sasuke is moaning 'harder' 'more' while naruto gives him a massage

Well thats all i got for now u can have em i cant wait for your next chapter

BIBI
CantHelpThisSmile
2009-06-10 . chapter 2
There's always the one where they decide to spar and trip and land on each other in a suggestive position!
That's sadly the only thing I can think of... I took too many tests and wore out my brain.
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