Great chapter. I loved the way Edward used Bella's jealousy to get what he wanted. It's so strange how Edward calling Bella "little one" can make you realize just how creepy it is for Bella to be 10 while he's decades older, but also realize that you find Edward's use of "little one" so very sexy.

Great chapter! This story is so unique and just...wonderful (from what I've read so far). Charlie's death brought tears to my eyes. I really loved everything you've done with this chapter.

Omg, this story is awesome.

Yeah. Hate Tanya. But actually get it. We've all done Edward and Rob in our times

wow i really cant wait for more of this story, its fantastic

Just discovered this story. It's unusual and continue a.s.a.p.

LOL, it was just getting good !

stupid Tanya.

cant wait to see how it goes !

vampire cat fight! wooho! Go bella! It is time for tanya pay for very pushy nature! Ancient bitch!

i am sorry, but for some reason i found the cat fight so funny! i don't know why! haha!

aw that was so pretty! now let's hope bella won't freak out now that she realises edward is it for her

haha! love your edward! Obsessed as ever but your versions is shamelessly horny too :)

wow! this is such an interesting plot! i am really hope you take this somewhere good :)

OMG OMG OMG! WOW WOW WOW WOW!

KEP WRITING :)

amazing chapter!

Damn Bella! possessive muc? hehe :)

kep writing (:

wow this is very very very good! omg, up soon! please!

lovelove love this story

keep up the great work

I missed this story. Thanks for the update. I hope they can stop the fight before someone gets hurt. I wonder if Bella's possessiveness will tone down after she is done with her period? How is she going to handle the thoughts of the girls at school? I'm glad that Edward seems to somewhat be able to control himself and his presence is making it easier for Bella. Enjoyed it.