great chapter and update soon plz

great story and im really looking forward to the next chapter to come out, so until then ja ne.

like the story please update.

Darling, as promised - the chapter is reread and rethought over. The feeling remains) It seems to me mostly as Itachi's POV, that is why Naruto, seen through the eyes of an older man, seems so unattainable and distant, and almost surreal)Cruel but weak, hard to read but easy to feel. This brings the softness to the drastic circumstances of the plot in this chapter. And it makes my brain ache for more of Itachi's thoughts about Naruto as a whole beast-human being. Because so far it seems Itachi tries to cut them apart - this Naruto and that beast. Is Itachi able to accept the double nature of the boy? Is Naruto willing to open up?

Want to read more) And LOVE ya)

ohohohoho! hope u post up the next chapter soon! im enjoying this storyline!

kayayayaay! very touching how u made naruto help itachi...how old is naruto and itachi in this story?

That counts as a cliff hanger! It does!

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Keep up the amazing work!

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Did you know your anonymous reviewing is turned off? :)

Anyways, it's been a while eh! I might not even be able to get through everything I need to today because it's touch-and-go with the computer... it's having a good time at the moment so I get to use it... the joys of machinery!

How are you?

Are you going to any Uni days? I'm going to... 4/5 I think. Should be fun!

A very very very interesting chapter! I can't wait to see their mission :D

And onto the next chapter!

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Hello there! Thanks for the new chapter. This was a big surprise for me, really. Don't know why but I thought that the prologue was the end of the story, because it would be Asya incarnate, meaning your usual love for skips and flashbacks. I was wrong and it intrigued me even more.

Now my thanks:

1. Scenes with cool guys suffernig and their boyfriends (though potentional) watching and admiring their coolness make me high, always. That was so romantic. Yammy!

2. Naruto is so amazingly bipolar that I desperatly want to hug and kiss him senseless. I think that is what manga still lacks.

3. I love tomato juice) Heh, I want some right now, so probably I shouldn't be thankful for that)

By the way, my icq history stores our recent talk on the difficulties of action writing. Well I guess that you've mastered it, because my heart is beating like crazy. And that's a good sign, ne? Action rulez!

And finally - what's with all racing pulse and everything - damn evil cliffies! Scary!

Love you, hon!

Please update!

A really interesting start!

:D

Hows the exams going? I've only got 2 left, thankfully!

Grh I don't want to work today. Stupid job. I want to lie around like a lazy slob! XD

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good start.. a bit confusing though at first but i guess it explains when names come up later.. keep it up! :)

OMG! Love, this is beautiful. To hell with the mood, it was so worth it. It is easy to understand Itachi so far, though I don't know his personality in this fic, but in this context his tears are very natural. A strong man knows his breaking point, a strong man has a right to turn weak. Because no one is perfect. And Naruto - that's just WOW! The scene reminded me slightly of this "Equilibrium" movie (don't know why though).

And! I was soo pleased to be the second to comment, and it has only been - how long? - since you published the work. Congratulations! And lot's of love)

wow, Itachi's hard to imagine weeping...lol... I really loved this! it's interesting x3

Continue! :D