omg i totally cant wait for the next chapter this is awesome so please update ^^ x

I don´t get it. Could be because I am first half through the anime. I read Castors story in the manga, but I don´t see the connection between him an this gem. Must be a new element you added to the story. Hasaki saves him? Does that mean that he never died? Then how can he be a Ghost?
How can she have used zaiphon at that earl age without any training?

IF YOU DONT WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON IM GONNA KILL YOU AND... YOU DONT WANT TO HEAR THE REST

Hm did the gras withered because she stand there or is it only due autumn? ANd if she is the cause of that, then why can the people touch and kick her? Why doesn´t they get affected from that power/skill?

Hm, a bunch of them kicked her and she is unharmed? Nothing broken? Why are they so suddenly death? Or did she faint out and time passed?

Hm, how does it come, that Hasaki is at the Military Academy, if she is a rewarded murderer?
Is she supported by the military or a wealthy family. Without it, a simple commoner wouldn´t stand a chance to get in that place.
Teito was assigned at the academy 'cause he had the Eye of Mikhail, even he was a battle-sklave.

Why should Hasaki be concerned about Teito`s humanity, if she never show a sign getting in contact with him?
How does she know that he can lost it?
Has she ever witnessed how cold he can be during a fight?
Without explanation it`s just a mere try to make a connection between two characters, where there is none. Except they are both bad-mouthed, but even then- that sorrow came to hastily.

Had she some bad experience with Shuri from the start, or does she only react cause Ayanami looked into her direction?
I hope you will serve a REALLY good explanation, why she allow herself, to disrespect an authority person in front of his subordinates.

Hm, why can she transform here zaiphon, as the only one from among all the students?
You can`t really call that a battle. The other prisoner was willing to die and you can´t call that a test.

Haha, your welcome.
Sometimes I think your name could also been the same pronouciation as "ominous" I think that's a cool name =D

Anyways,
Thanks for updating, I can't wait to read more regarding Hasaki and her history.

No! Now I really want to know what happened to Hasaki! Poor Hasaki to have been through so much at 4. Update please.

Gah. i'm too lazy to log in. Wonderfully suspenseful! Though I hope nothing to bad happens to Hasaki...

YAYZ! U UPDATED!! XD
Noo...Mikage TT.TT
Hasaki's... dead? one of the 7 ghosts??
wonder wats gonna happen^^

update ^^

wow...i love it! update, dammit! its so cool!

OMG THIS STORY ROCKS!! okay... i may be a tad high from the fanta i'm drinking rite now but meh. good story wither way. update soon!

Hasaki is so cold!

Cool story ^^ the parts you typed in that were in the anime/manga were written well, and I think that it was so cool how you changed around the plot slightly to fit in your OC! In other words...Awesome job!

Meh, forever? You say that cause you haven't seen the speed at which I update (or lack therefort)
It was a nice chapter, and I think this is shaping up to become a nice story

FINALLY you updated!!
I'm thinking your name should be pronouced as Ohm-mini-as...

Anyways, I can't wait to find out more about Hasaki's past so we know how she met up with Ayanami and Castor.

Keep continuing~