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ScoobySnax
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
Just fave-ing you.
ScoobySnax
2009-11-29 . chapter 4
It is not often that I read fanfiction with such eloquence and emotion. That was absolutely FANTASTIC, the best I've read in years. Loved it. Characterization was spot-on, accents were well done and writing was great. Overall, a wonderful, WONDERFUL read. You did an amazing job on your first OreO...you should keep it up. I'm not usually one to lavish such praise on an author, but damn, you deserve it!

Oh yeah, I scrolled up and saw something that made me smile. Loved the Seuss reference.
Rev
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
Oh, woow...

This was so awesome to read, I'm gonna have to read it again someday soon.. It was that great.

PRETTY PLEASE, do another Oreo fic, I really adored this story!
Crysania Fay
2009-08-27 . chapter 4
That was beautiful. Would you mind if I put it on my web page? Please?
Nienna Rose
2009-07-26 . chapter 4
I really love this chapt even tho it was way too long for me & I wish you'd broken it up into 2 chapts. You got everyones feelings in a really believable way something you did thru out the whole story & you really made me believe everyone was going to be okay in the end & I like happy endings. I liked this so much I read it twice something I never do but maybe because since this is the end I really didn't want it to end. You really got me invested in this story even tho it took forever for you to update tho I'm glad your better by the way. I think you should write this couple more often maybe a sequel!!
Thank You
2009-07-25 . chapter 4
What a FANTASTIC story! You've officially made me a OREO shipper, which I never thought would happen. But the characters were so believable, that I just couldn't help myself.

Will you do another Oreo Story in the future? I really hope you do, this story was simply too addicting to read.
aiRo25
2009-07-24 . chapter 4
This was incredibly good. I really felt bad for Rogue, but happy for Storm and Remy. It's real life, messy, but so, so worth it.
wallpaperdoll
2009-07-23 . chapter 4
Bravo! What an amazing ending. I especially loved the little bit Yukio shared about the red thread pulling them back together... And I'm glad you gave closure to Remy and Rogue. It was very touching and beautifully written. Thank you for this. It was an amazing read :)
turtlerelay
2009-07-23 . chapter 4
Though I'm absolutley a supporter of Rogue/Remy and am in no way a supporter of Ororo/Remy I must say you won me over for the duration of this fic. Beautifully written. Well Done. While reading it I still found myself hoping that he and Rogue would get together but I also found myself wanting Ororo to have chance too. And concidering my shipping preference that's pretty great.

You made me care for the characters. And still respected Rogue and Remy's relationship.

Thanks for the good read.
kendrat199
2009-07-22 . chapter 4
Of course Remy and Ororo will always be fated to be together, they're OreO, after all. Everytime! Everytime I read your dialogue and mannerisms for Logan, I fall for him and I think...why can't Mystique permanently shape shift into Ro so she can be with Logan too. I honestly don't know how you're able to portray him so perfectly, perhaps you've been helped by Tante Mattie's magic. Anyways, yay to Yukio! I imagine her being the only fiery one to cause serene Ororo, to go into a party frenzy. Why are they the best of friends :). And, I nearly stopped breathing when Remy was looking at Ororo and that guy's interaction. The repetition of "too" was perfect. He was too close, that dress was too short, etc. And the contrast of his smooty hair compared to her pristine locks was so a Jealous Remy. Your writing is phenomenal, and as much as I'd like to teleport Rogue to another planet, I am glad she's okay with Ro and Remy. (Better be!)

I seriously wanted to hug Scott (not surprising because I love that man), when he was happy to be a god father.

And kitty and piotr are so cute, may they last forever! Nightcrawler is a doll, and Hank...I can see myself pining after that genius man!

Eh! I just remembered. Where the hell is the professor in this! You know I ♥ my Xavier.

Also, a bit of corrections. You're actions and dialogue for Logan are top notch, but here's corrections for Remy's accent. Oh yeah, before I forget! I plan on making a new x-men fanfic (I know I need to update my others) and although I'm confident in my portrayal of Remy, my Logan isn't perfect so if you ever read, your feedback would be much appreciated. Kk, here's corrections.

“De t’ing wid yo' homme is yo' too weak when it comes t' women. Men need ta stick toget'er.”

("th" sound found in English is completely unknown to french speakers. H is silent, as you probably know :) )

“Jean doesn’t . . .”
(Just like to say that I ♥ Scott!)

“ Merde! Yo’re henpecked homme jus admi' it. An’ now dat Remy open yo’ eyes fo' yo', yo' wanna move outta my way?”


“Ororo, yo' should’ve talked t' me, tol' me what was goin' on,” he said and shook his head.

Mon chère=ma chère (since remy's dear is a female, and chère is feminine, it becomes "ma". Had Ororo said it to Remy, it'd be "mon cher", and no accent! French is odd, to say the least, haha)

First few paragraphs it says "of out" rather than "out of". I'm sure there's some we both missed, but no need in me being so proper and annoying, neh?

Great job on your first OreO story! I want more, woman!

-kendra <3
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2009-07-03 . chapter 3
Where is that DAMN update?!
Hawaiichick
2009-06-21 . chapter 3
Yay, an update! I loved the fight scene between Remy and Logan...especially when Remy was was crushing Ororo's flowers...and then tried to "fix" them. Very endearing and sweet. Love the romantic tension between everyone (Logan, Ororo, Rouge and Remy). Boy, it's going to be a complicated one to unravel.
hnyswtypie
2009-06-20 . chapter 3
Damn! This story is amazing. I love the way you've written each character. Jean is probably my favorite in this chapter.

More, please!
snlover10
2009-06-18 . chapter 3
Yaay! I'm so thankful for the update!
I especially loved the bit where Logan and Remy face off. I love seeing them get all jealous and worked up and fight over Ororo.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Chigirl
2009-06-17 . chapter 3
I love this story! I almost feel sorry for Rouge...almost.I hope Remy tells Ro how he feels soon.
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