My, my, I totally love this ^__^ Very well done on getting that story from that prompt, haha! I especially liked the ending ;D

Wow! Excellently written, and with such vivid detail! The only thing I would correct would be the rating. I would have rated it a T, for implied naughtiness ;)

You certainly answered this challenge well. I hope others will follow your example, this prompt is an excellent idea.

I don't suppose you could be persuaded to write a sequel?