 TotallyObsessive 2009-07-22 . chapter 1Sorry in advance for this upcoming rant... :D I hope you don't mind.
I really like the idea of this story. It's a strong point and feeling but you made something that could have gone down a dark and dreary road, very heart felt and sweet if not totally hilarious :] I enjoyed this story a lot, I thought it had just enough emotion for a wonderful plot and insight but also wasn't worked to hard and was really very fun anf cute.
lol and the part in Dino's dreams cracked me up, especially the part with flounder and Mukuro asking if he raped his childhood, you had me laughing so hard for a good minute or two haha thats was great.
Just the whole story was excellent and well thought. You captured the characters perfectly and I really enjoy you're writing style, it's fluent and sophisticated but also easy to read and paints a good picture. haha sorry for going on like this, but once again great job! |