Hmm..a good story so far, though there are a few errors in punctuation. You might need a beta reader.

Not really clear on how old you need to be to be affected by the virus. I figured Motoko would still be alive, plus MAYBE Naru, but Kitsune, Mutsume, and Keitaro would all be dead for sure. Oh, plus Sarah would be alive.

MOre please! and faster updates if possible?

lol Kaolla, nice work! more please

xD yay, Kaolla! She just bursts with energy @__@ Her personality with Shinobu's in this story is excellent xD

wow very nice story ^^ i like the way how you describe the feelings and emotions that shinobu's going through, the feelings of knowing she has to be strong in order to make it yet...she really just wants her family and friends. so very good story ^^ (hope i made sense) will there be a chater 2?? :D

Oh, interesting... I can't tell whether or not I'd be happy being all alone in the world. xD Waiting eagerly for the next chapter, I like how you left this one open for the next!

very good, I like it, write more please.