Totally had a WTF moment when Sebastian proposed. Oh dear. I'll admit that though I thought your portrayal of the characters was good, something seemed, off. I cannot quite put my finger on it, perhaps the circumstances were a tad forced?
Overall, it was a fun little read.
Thank you for writing it.
Ja ne!

Ah kawaii! Why don't you just accept him ciel? x3

R&R if you will - s/4608424/1/Koibito

This is WAYYY too sad ;; But I loved it.

So...they don't get married? That's sad. They're an amazing couple...

This was great!

Nice work :D

So does that mean that Ceil wears the ring on a chain under his cloths? AND he dosent tell Sebastian... Oww soooo sweet, it's just like him!

A proposal was definitely the last thing I saw coming. Wonderfully in character...

And if I could have laughed any harder I would have.

Wow...just wow. If that ever did happen in the series that would be exactly how it would happen! The characters were really IC! I really loved this! I kept expecting Sebastian to suddenly smile and say, "Just kidding!" But he didn't! OMG! I would be so confused if I were Ciel! Though I feel sorry for Sebastian. For once in his life he tries to be serious and Ciel doesn't even believe him! (sigh) I wish there would be a sequel to this. Maybe fast forward to the time when Ciel's marrying Lizzie and Sebas-chan is all sad because Ciel rejected his proposal and...yeah, just a sequel. OOOH! Maybe he could ruin the wedding! Say "I OBJECT!" and run off with a screaming Ciel to make love to him all night! YES! That's it!

Oh god, there I go with my imagination again. Anyway, thank you so much for this inspiring piece!

Beans

Lol as much as I loved this story, I think I enjoyed your conversation with your mom more XD

x'D

This is adorable.

And it was so in character!

CliffhangersLove.

Now I'm tempted to ask a friend of mine to draw me a picture of Sebastian in a dress.

;D

I love it so much! I must go write more SebaCiel myself now. You made them so in-character, and Your grammer and spelling were really good. I loved it!

AW. This made me kinda sad...I know Fluff and SebaCiel don't go together since it's such a tragic pairing and both of them are damned in more ways than one...but I kinda wished Seba had insisted on staying and convincing Ciel he was serious. Follow up chapter? No? Ah, well. I can dream. And I"m happy to hear you plan on updating But a Humble Servant, that story is great, too :D

Dear Yina K - formerly Nearu,

Beautiful. That's the first word in my mind...that keeps repeating itself over and over. I absolutely love it. It's so heartwrenching as I read how Sebastian shows just how much he cares for Ciel. He really truly cares for him, doesn't he? At least in my opinion. I like how you have captured that Ciel isn't a romantic person. That's exactly how I imagined his character to act. Instead of saying how he feels, he swallows it and lashes out angrily. I have always loved CielXSebastian pairings so I really enjoyed reading this!

I feel that Sebastian is sad that Ciel is going to be married to Elizabeth. And then he pops the question! It's really cute how Sebastian acts when proposing to Ciel. Though Ciel thinks he is teasing him, I believe he isn't. I believe Sebastian really does want to marry Ciel and to help make his marriage meaningful and Ciel wishes. Haha even though Ciel refuses to amit it, once that ring fits onto his finger, it seems like it should of been there from the very beginning. It's as Sebastian says there are no bonds stronger than theirs.

And finally, I just wanted to say/type how amazing this fan fiction is. You have written it wonderfully, Yina K. I sincerely wish you would carry it on. Let Ciel give his answer to Sebastian...let the wedding take place! And of course, the consequences of Ciel's answer. I would love it so if you carried this on. But alas, I cannot force you. So I will leave it to you. Until then, take care and farewell.

-13AkiraKuranXI

This is just confusing and a bit shocking I guess. It kinda left me pondering, whether it is romance or not...

This was great.

Very nice. And sad...