A completely different side to the ever cool-and-collected Spock. I like it.

That was sad and so sweet.

I really enjoyed this. Spock was a little out of character but sometimes people can pull it off and you did wonderfully!!

Thank you for posting this!

Saki

Yeah...these two have easily become one of my favorite ships to set sail on. It just seems so...logical! :P

I really enjoyed this story. It was very well written, and neither character is really OOC. It was a very enjoyable story! I hope to see more!

Oh gosh, I loved that. There was a lot of feeling in that piece.

"You are not at liberty to make that promise." he whispered as he held me tightly.


<- GENIUS.

it's awesome! so cute and sweet =D
i love the fact that spock actually cries. it really shows his character :D good job! <3

This is so lovely... Angsty, powerfully emotional. I felt myself feeling the pain those two felt. Amazing, you have such a way of expressing things. An eloquence in your writing. I very much enjoyed this one.

OMG I was SO close to sobbing right along with him then, that was so well written, full of emotion and utter pain :-(
You`re an exceptional writer hon, you really are!
Oh lucky Nyota yet again, she gets to service him AND comfort him. Please can I be her? Please? LOL!
X XX

That was sweet and loving. :)

only thing to do - more...

Very angsty and sweet - more please! :)

Suspense! Just kidding. That was a bit intense. Coolio. =D

All hail the angst! Very nice.

great chapter ! i love how you portraited spock , the angst in him was beautifuly portraited ,


i can´t wait for more,


nanda