aw this was so cute. i love it when nathan acts the dad to claire too :) great job with this. :)

OMG that was beautiful! I loved it so much! Lovely job!
I am curious though about how his family would handle it (I know he and Heidi are divorced but it would be interesting).

awh this is soo cute!!
love it
write more! :D

Wow this is your FIRST heroes story? It's excellent!!

Anywho, AWH. I was tearing up when i was reading this, I felt so sad. (In a good way haha)

Great job

I realize it's probably not supposed to be, but I couldn't help but read this story from an angle of post-An Invisible Thread. Which made it creepy, and probably not at all what you were going for. That's just my fixation, though, so no fault of yours.

I'm a sucker for a good family-oriented fic. And the Petrellis are just simply wonderful.
I loved the way you portrayed them, so true to how they are on the show. The scene between Nathan and Claire was so tender and sweet, it was almost like I was watching an actual episode of Heroes.

Great writing for your first fic. I'm very impressed. Keep going with this one, I'd love to see where the Petrellis end up.

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Also (talking about the Petrellis), check out my fic titled "The Vow". If you have an appreciation/love for Heroes most complicated family, then I think you'll like what I've written.