Well I dislike cliff hangers. So pleas keep writting

really good!

update

omg, i read the whole vampire kisses. could you explain to me what gift she gave him?

I think you should get trevor to tell raven how he feels about her and she tells him she loves him back and breaks up with Alexander and goes running back to trevor and just when their about to kiss trevor's alarm goes off and he realizes it was just another one of his love dreams about raven.

Hehe, I like the idea of this being in Trevor's POV. Good spin on things. But (not to be harsh or anything) the grammar for the chappie sucked. Have you thought of getting a Beta Reader to help with the story? I'm telling you they work wonders.

you shpold lock raven and trevor together for a while and aer wut happens wiht them.aw man i dont know just let hte juices flow take down any barriers

i love this story so much hey keep reading or read if u havent a sterling non the less in the end shoo this is a spoiler cuz its gonna be big trevor and rav get married. but this will happene at the end so read it.

Its good, but you might want to make it more masculine.

Trevor's crazy, but it works. His thoughts are so one-minded toward Raven. :P Keep it up!

this story is so awsome its one of my favs

awesome... sort of. oops! don't take that personally, i didn't mean it in a bad way... i'm just glad i found some one who would actually write anout what goes on in Trev's head... my friends think i am crazy for even caring about him.
a little more detail might be nice, but other than that, two thumbs up, so far.

I like it.
Even though it is a little corny and blunt. Haha.
I'm ready for the next chapter of this story(:
Did you know they came out with the 5 and 6 book?

i cant wait dor the next chappie

Love it so far. It totally sounds like trevor! Update soon