 RavenclawRebel 2009-07-30 . chapter 19I have loved reading this! It was an amazing epilogue, and I was so glad Christian didn't kill himself. I was surprised when the Duke did, but I could see why he would. And I liked seeing how the characters moved on. It was perfect! :D |
 zeelia 2009-07-30 . chapter 19 I have only one thing to say: WHAT THE HELL?
you copy/pasted the story, narrated it in a wierd modern times way, stuck an awfull piece at the end and expect me to congratulate you??! What''s
going on in your head??
the worst part is that you actually have a good writting style but don't use it!!
Moulin Rouge is my favorite movie above all others and it kills me to read deformed versions of it.
so please, don't take any of this personnaly, and just write your stories with more imagination than simply copying the basic one!! |
 FoSizzle 2009-07-30 . chapter 18Aw so sad! I love it! Please update soon! |
 RavenclawRebel 2009-07-29 . chapter 18That was so sad! and so amazingly written! Promise me you'll update soon! Please? |
 RavenclawRebel 2009-07-28 . chapter 17Aww! Thanks for mentioning my story in your story! I appreciate it! :D This was a great chapter and I so can't wait to read more! |
 RavenclawRebel 2009-07-14 . chapter 16This is so sad! I like how Satine is sorta accepting her death, but at the same time, she's not. She still pictures her life with Christian. I love it! Please update soon! |
 RavenclawRebel 2009-07-05 . chapter 15This was so sad! Poor Satine... And that one line is so true! "It's awfully romantic to die young." what book is that from, anyways? Have you noticed how the movie ends just as Christian had it end in the practice rehearsals? You'd think they'd realize that. :D anywho, it's late, and I'm tired. Please update soon! I'll try to update my story, but no promises... I still have an essay to write and items I need for my overseas trip. Night! :) |
 RavenclawRebel 2009-06-30 . chapter 14I. Loved. It! Please update soon! |
 2castro7 2009-06-30 . chapter 14It's great how you caught the characters emotions! Please continue. |
 AModernDayRose 2009-06-29 . chapter 13 I like this story! I look forward to reading the next chapters. You have captured the characters very well.
~Scarlett~ |
 2castro7 2009-06-24 . chapter 13AH! More! More! More! More! |
 RavenclawRebel 2009-06-23 . chapter 13Wow. This was a great chapter. One of your best, me thinks. It was...wow. I could actually feel what Christian was feeling. Wow. I'm speechless!
~Elphie |
 2castro7 2009-06-23 . chapter 12I love how you keep the readers on the edge of their seats with every ending. I just can't wait for the next chapter! |
 DefyingGravityElphaba 2009-06-21 . chapter 12 It takes too dang long to log in from my phone! :) anyways, I loved it, and please update soon! |
 2castro7 2009-06-19 . chapter 1AH! I loved the story... I loved how you ended the last chapter (11)... It was so good! Pls. write more! |