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Sera22
2009-12-13 . chapter 1
You earned a review.
I liked your OC, her special "trait" and of course how you described Victor.
Maybe you will write a secquel... please?? ^^

I really had to stifle my laughter when reading some parts of your story because you managed to amuse your reader even during some tough scenes between the two.

Very well done!
Rubiksmycube
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
OH!
I like it!
I likes i likes i likes~!
NOt the everyday run of the mill type of fic.
INteresting OC
hate the ones that are all badass and this and that and muck!
SolLaDama
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness! I loved this story. Absolutely great and different <3 :D
ROGUEFURY
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
This was one of the morbidly fascinating stories. Love how you wrote Victor and love the intrigue you leave us with at the end...there were some points when my brain was broken lol but overall this was a really fun read!
ReprimandedAngel
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Plea~se make a part 2. This is officially my fave Sabertooth story. I know you probably had no plans to make a part 2 but that would be SO awesome if you did.
v.Rabbit.n.Writer.v
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
Wow! Great one-shot! I'd love to see more! *hint hint!!* I really liked the setting - San Fran is one of my most favorite places in the world!! And I can definitely picture Pine Street - so major kudos! It's always fun to recognize a place someone else is writing about. I liked the Russian elements, too - Dolly's story is believable in it's brevity.

All in all, I really liked this! More, please! :-)
CreedsGalBirdy
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
Amazing stuff. You got XMO:W Victor down, absolutely! Sad to see, however, that this is the only X-Men story you have. I'll check out your Iron Man stuff but I'd love to see another Victor story from you. Keep up the good work!

Oh, also, in the last little bit, you call Victor "Vincent".
PeinVPuppy
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
i dont know why i like this story but i do i think you should do a nother one maybe like Mouse Tango 2
jacobsbabygrl
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
o my Carlisle that was awesome! pLEASE DON'T LET IT BE A ONESHOT!
Miss Button Madder
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
I really like this story! Very interesting. I think you wrote Victor very well, not to mention the entire story in general.

I was somewhat sad that it ended! D=

A very steamy, and enjoyable read! Excellent work! ;D

2009 Sabretooth = the sex.
Britt601
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
Oh, I LOVE stories like this. You did a good job!
Missus Dane
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
loved it... especially how you portray Victor, as a vicious animal, but with feelings buried deep within him(very deep within:)
you do realise this calls for a sequal, right??

Missus Dane:D
jenstog
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
Cinco. I am a slave to you! I did NOT want to read this. Did NOT! Haven't seen the new movie. And honestly I got a feeling that it'd be in my opinion 'dark' even from opening my new story email alert. But you wrote it, and I as I stated, I'm a slave to you!

WHOA friggin baby. Definately not you're normal bone-jumping session here. the way you glazed over death and rape and murder here was indeed dark for me, but at the same time, so intriguing and fresh. The sex! If you can even call it sex... more like hot deep physical interaction to the tenth power. Descriptions were amazing. I completely feel for this coupling and want some more meat in her freezer soon!

I bow to your awesomeness!

-Jen
Lisa
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
This is such a unique story. I love your OC and she just shines with gritty realism. I rather hope that you write more about her. You are certainly a talented writer. I'll have to read anything else you've written. It's sure to be great!
volta
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
great writing, very creative! Unusual defnately, I can't believe you don't have more reviews!
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