Lawlz, I can just imagine Riley and her rolling around the dirt! Please update quickly :)

Excellent chapter. Love the bonding moment between Riley and Bobbi. Please update soon.

not much story progression, but still a great chapter

Absolutly amazing. To be honest I hardly ever read but I could not put my phone down for this! Its incredible I can't wait for more! I love the way it plays out I can see it in my head so vividly. Keep goin can't wait to read more :)

:) I love Riley's smart aleck remarks. They make me smile. Joseph and Elizabeth are meanies... >.< Good chappie!

wow, I really like that you're taking this seriously. This is totally awesome!

Funnily enough, if anyone is going to turn on Elizabeth, I'm thinking it'll be Vikki. He's got an honest emotional attachment to Bobbi and he's already acted on her behalf against one of his 'family.' A little more encouragement along that line and he might jump altogether if she's in enough danger. Evan, though, is coming across as more of a sociopath than the others. Not a full-blown crazy, but he's charming, nice, and capable of switching to a cold-blooded killer in less than a breath. So long as he's not provoked, he's a sweetie. Push the right button, and he does a one-eighty. You're developing some very interesting characters.

39 chapters in and your story is still so interesting! I always look forward to your updates, and I'm sorry that you will be on hiatus, but I am glad that you are taking your story so seriously. Keep it up!

Excellent chapter. Let's hope that Ben will be able to change the "status quo" to their favor. Please update soon.

Excellent chapter. It seems a shame that Evan is working for the bad guys. Please update soon.

Wow, what an incredibly thought out plotline! Ur writing is ingenious! I love this story!

Oh, I wonder if leaving the statue behind will have consquences... Keep it up!

Excellent story so far. It is nice to have a little background on Riley there. Please update soon.

i totally love this and must know what happens next! but i'll be patient, cause it's so good!

Wow, I wonder what that was all about. This is really good. Update soon!