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Flame150
2009-12-01 . chapter 3
I want to see where this story goes for I really like it so far and I am interested in reading the rest. So I hope you update soon.
Kathy5645
2009-09-17 . chapter 3
Wow, this is a really good story!!
hannah
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
it's really good
blondebrat2006
2009-08-19 . chapter 3
Hmm..This is different..I like it..I look forward to readng more..
Yaoi Sakka
2009-08-19 . chapter 3
-squeal- Look an update!! I utterly loved it! 'specially when Harry said that there were no second chances... So good! ^.^
shidoni
2009-06-29 . chapter 2
i hate cliff hangers but i cant wait to read what happens next
Xx.Fate.Eater.xX
2009-06-21 . chapter 2
=D Woot! That was awesome. Tom kicked ass! *Cheers* And here I thought he sounded a bit "weak" in the last chapter. I have gained respect for him again! *Jumps excitedly* I love Tom/Voldemort! =D Update soon, I'm very curious what will happen! Btw, that was a cool place to end it.
Yaoi Sakka
2009-06-17 . chapter 2
ZOMG! -has a fangirl moment-... Okay... Had to get that out. That was amazing. Poor Aurors... He didn't kill them did he? T.T ... UPDATE SOON! I want to know what happens... -pouts-... okay... I need to stop spazzing into the review box...
DarkNaruto002
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
I say, continue! Your story is very fascinatin gby judging the summary that you have provided and the first chapter. I like that you have protrayed Voldemlolt to be different than what is expected: him claiming forgivness. Though, I would like to suggest you providing information on why and how he came up with the need for forgiveness.

I suggest you providing information and the changes (also in appearance wise) of how Harry Potter has changed after Voldemolt's death. I saw few spelling mistakes, but they can be fixed.

I cannot wait until Tom's and Harry's meeting and the world's reaction. I do have a question though. The person that was with Tom said that during the Muggles are now muggles are shown great respect; does this, then, mean that the muggles now know of the WIzarding world? I also suggest giving more information on what Harry has been up tp; you know, how and when he became an Auror, etc.

Overall, your story is very promising and a delight to read. Please update soon!
Xx.Fate.Eater.xX
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
YAY! Curse anyone who says nay! xD

But seriously, update. No need to rush or anything. :D

I liked it, so this is based after the last book right?

*Blinks* "Beware"... xD lmfao. What is he, the box ghost?! XD

Ja ne~!
Yaoi Sakka
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
hehe... I'll make sure you update... cause this is good! either you update or I start getting creative in ways to steal your spiral so I can read what you write... >D
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