Very good chapter. This story was good, but I didn't find it as good as your other stories, I guess it's because of too much narration and not enough dialogue. It's like reading a synopsis of the events in the characters' lives. And the story seemed rushed at times, but the dialogue in it did have made the story enjoyable to read. I's sorry to say that I kinda lost interest after chapter 13 and took me weeks to come back here to finish reading the rest of the story. Still, it was enjoyable to learn more about Vincent's and Catherine's descendants. I still look forward to reading your future BatB stories.

So many wedding. Nice chapter.

Seem all the leonine males and their mates get young very young.

To cute! Cannot wait for the rest.

Good chapter with a totally shocking ending. However, I will reserve my reaction until Chapter 17, just in case you pull a fast one on me put a positive spin on the "comment".

More please, soon

Vanessa

Uh oh, cliff hanger.

Good chapter filled with lots of weddings.

Glad you updated.

AW HOW SWEET

Glad you updated.

Aw! (sniff, sniff) that wwas a great chapter. It read more like something out of a Danielle Steele novel, then a story written by a guy. You are amazing.

Thanks
Vanessa

Are they confusing Danielle for Alexandra? The chapter was pretty routine until the attempted kidnapped.

Still enjoying it.

Great chapter. I love all of the references to Catherine and Vincent and all of the interplay between the parents. It makes your heart warm to see love rekindled and love blossom. I was a little concerned that maybe Danielle and Jonathon would be bond or that maybe she was not his bond mate, but since you explained about the bond duing that conversation between Jonathon and William, I understand.

Thanks

More please

OMG, how embarrassing for Danielle to find herself in the bathing pool with Jonathon's mother and other tunnel women when they suspected what that she and Jonathon's relationship had changed to a more intimate level. What did Danielle expect showing up wearing one of Jonathon's robs and nothing else underneath it. My face would have turned as bright red as hers did. LOL.

This chapter made me smile. So many people blushing.