This story is CRAP! This is the worst story EVER! I actually went blind when I read it-PSYCHE! THIS STORY IS FREAKIN SWEET! DO MORE!

uh just to tell you olivia is dead. stewie killed her by burning down the cardbord house

that was a great chapter. Nay, this is a great story! Keep with the good work!

I love this story, lol. And I LOVE THE TEXTING PART! HOW DID YOU THINK OF THAT? Incredible.

You know the flashback about Stewie's head in there?
Well, Brian was actually the supervisor, but apart from that this is AWESOME!

TOWEL BOY!

A.

I may be a bit biast but I loved this chapter ;) and I think that your writing is getting a lot better...Again to everyone who reads this I did not write this I just typed it up for her.

Next chapter! PLEASE!

i have to say that you did a nice job writing this time :D and I didn't even have to add too much detail :P but it is really coming along nicely :D

very nice ;) you're getting the hang of this fanfiction writing thing :D now we just gotta work on you typing more words :P

i would have to say that this is a very good prologe ;) and I can't wait until more :D

WOW! WHAT A GREAT STORY MAN! You may have already noticed that I'm speaking sarcastically, and have easily noticed the lack of a story in this entry. Try uploading a chapter along with your little A/N next time...just a helpful suggestion.