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Speciosus Nihilum
2009-10-09 . chapter 5
Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing...but anyway, another awesome chapter! ^_^ Poor Becca, getting turned down from every job...I really wanted to give her a hug. It's a good thing "Doctor" Jude was there to cheer her up, though. :) And even though Becca failed at all the interviews, her responses were very funny. I loved the way Wyatt snuck up on Jonesy in the beginning, too; the thought of Jonesy falling on his face is almost as great as Nikki shoving a sock in his mouth. XD Hmm...I wonder where Jude's taking Becca...? I can't wait to find out. ;)

Oh, and you are so unbelievably sweet! ^_^ *glomps through computer screen* But really, I can't even explain how warm and fuzzy I feel right now. :D Thank you so much!
1000GreenSun
2009-09-29 . chapter 5
Haha, that was so funny! I feel mean for saying that Becca's interviews were my fave, tho :D

Haha. Awesome as always, buddeh! And I love the Becca/Jude :D

Can't wait for more!
halloweenbaby
2009-09-27 . chapter 5
aww poor Becca...
halloweenbaby
2009-09-08 . chapter 4
This is really good, cant wait till the next update
Speciosus Nihilum
2009-08-22 . chapter 4
Hey there! Once again, you've written an awesome chapter. There are some great one-liners in here, like the fact that she feels like slitting her wrists and writing crappy poetry when she's on her period. I think you definitely captured Starr's (I mean, "Nebula's") creepiness; even I got the shivers. I really like your title, too; "Quebeca" is a really amusing fake last name. And Jude was written just as adorably as he always is (his denseness only makes him cuter). It would be great to see Jonesy get all protective of Becca if anything happens between her and Jude, too; him getting all "older-mature-brother" on Jude would be hilarious. Oh, and I know I've said this before, but it's so cute how Becca doesn't know he likes her!

...Whew. Well, before I bore you with any more rambling, just let me say: Great job! I can't wait 'til the next update. ^_^
Nicholas L
2009-08-22 . chapter 4
I like this :]
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Nicholas L
2009-08-17 . chapter 3
Dude, you totally captured the vibe of 6teen. I love this, I hope you update this.
Speciosus Nihilum
2009-07-26 . chapter 3
Hey there! This chapter was hilarious! I love Becca's point of view even more than Jude's. She's really funny, especially with that whole "pecanariffic" line and the thoughts about her being a "fatty fatty two by four." "Mountain Mist" and "Dr. Spice" were really clever pop brands, too. ;) I also think it's really cute that they're totally crushing on each other, but don't realize they both feel the same way (I hope that made sense...and even if it didn't, it was a total compliment). Anyway, I can't wait until the next chapter! ^_^
NejisDarkNymph
2009-07-23 . chapter 3
hahaha Popcorn in the guys face, totaly awesome!
Thank you for updating dudette ^_^!!
1000GreenSun
2009-07-23 . chapter 3
Haha, that was hilarious! Lurve it! Can't wait for more! :D
NejisDarkNymph
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
Awe I feel for ya Jude!!
Please update again soon, I loved it!!
Thank You!!
^_^
Speciosus Nihilum
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
Another great chapter! I probably already said this, but I think it's really cool how you're going to be switching around with the point-of-views--I can't wait to read Becca's for the first time. Oh, and I checked out your picture on deviantART and left a comment, there, too...I think it's really cool how I've finally found someone else who likes to write AND draw.

Anyway, wonderful job (again), and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Speciosus Nihilum
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
This story was really good! I don't usually read fanfics with OCs (what a hypocrite, I know, considering that's all I write). However, this was awesome. You did a great job writing from Jude's point of view, and those last few lines broke my heart:

"The only girl that cared if I was hurt when I fell, the only girl who would eat a platter of chicken wings in front of me, the only girl willing to go into a lame yo-yo shop with me just so she could meet my friend was-"

Yeah, I had to wipe a tear from my eye because of that one. Anyway, great job! This is definitely going on my fave list. ^_^
Whatever-chan
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
dude! or dudette, you have to make more of this! THIS IS THE MOST AWSOMEST STORIE I HAVE READ!
lady bunny
2009-06-02 . chapter 1
update to this one put more chapters
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