OMFnG!

My Immortal is one of the worst things ever created (though not as bad as Family Guy or Twilight)

but it's still so unbelievably horrible that it's hilarious!

Idiots! This is a parody!

Your kidding right? My Immortal was the worst fanfiction in history.

AlexIceQueen, don't tell someone to use "the English language" when you don't know how to use it yourself. It's "using," not "useing." Wow. Why don't people read the author's notes? This is a parody...lol, it's supposed to be ridiculous. Anywho. I smell what you're cooking. Especially the "black hair with purple streaks" and corset bit. Makes me smile, haha...Thanks for this. :) And if I read ONE MORE FIC where the OC's name is Shadow, I'm going to murder someone.

Please try useing the english language.

HA HA! At first I thought some iodiot was wrint like that because they were lazy were too lazy to use proper english but now I see that you were doing on purpose I find it funny!

xD I'z notza pep tilz Izey say I amz.

Butchering the Enlgish language...god I hate it!...I also hate misspelled words to -looks at different story I'm reading- -eye twitches-

Gothgasm. HAH!

ROFL I absoloutley love this seen as Ima goth afterall ;D, yeah I hate preps too YAY xD they piss me off so yeah I really enjoyed reading this, itt made me laugh, specially the chicks name it was so over the top :P

Mick, AKA Hollywood Grimm

I cnt bleeve u cremated at drakko!

sudge a gud chptur!

rite moore!

luv rahbyn.

i luv blud % gutz.

[ I hate writers that like writing annoying shit like this, you guys give idealists a bad name! muwah!

Christ, I can't even finish reading this! I wanna kill people who write like that! I get that you wrote it that way to be an annoying prick but...GAH!

But its funny though, the thought of it I mean. It'd be funny to read, elaborated and written correctly...not like a total n00b.

OMG, dat wuz lyke da best thing evr!1

Rite moore sune!1

(Kristen!11 dis iz u!1)

Luv, rahbyn % kirsten.