Your welcome dear!

Lot better now. <3 Kanda's second message might have been a bit too much, but otherwise, he's not OOC, or at least - so little that it doesn't hurt, and I'm hurt easily. : D

I loved this part, so sweet and innocent, and yet so much emotion in it, your adds to the last part really made it...I don't know, so full of feeling. It made my heart sing. XD

Nice work, now do more. <3

Yuuka! V

Although Kanda was still a bit OCC (I mean it is impossible to make him OC when placed in such a situation ;D) but the story was much love! Though I doubt Rabi could find Kanda so soon XDD I had a hard time imagining Allen in his outside attire... he just feels so messy DD: I still love the way you brought them back together, it was so sweet and just so damn full of love~! v

Kuro

PS: I just love the image you make from Kanda's eyes~

Well keep up the good work! This story was kinda cute. n.n

Well, it is true that Kanda is OOC here, but I guess it's hard to make Kanda IC when he can't move like we know he normally would since he's half-blind and such. Besides, he can hardly snap at the Moyshi if he doesn't know where EXACTELY the Moyashi is standing and the glares are probably also hard to pull off if the basically only thing you see are damn lotus flowers!
So, long story short: Kanda is OOC, but it's not disturbing or anything since it's almost impossible tp make him IC here. And I loved your story. I hope that you'll write an epilog to it and if you don't then that I stumble upon more of your writings XD

This was so beautifully heartbreaking! The whole concept was wonderfully done, it made me feel touched, yet sad. Great job with this!

Also, I don't think Kanda was OOC. I could see Kanda writing such words more so than him saying them out loud, so I thought it was a brilliant idea. It's not like Kanda knew Lavi would find either message, so it would be much easier from him to spill out his heart in such a simple yet meaningful message. So I liked it a lot :D!

I want a reunion chapter :hm.

That was really good. I give you cookies for the wonderful way you portrayed both Lavi and Kanda. Your efforts did not go to waste in the least. Good job.

aww.. how sweet. i can't wait to see what will happen next! ^^

The first message that Kanda put in the bottle was sweet but not overly fluffy to murder his character while the last one was just a little TOO sweet. But still, I like this fic very much, it was sad but ended with quite a happy note to it :DD And I like how Kanda is kinda blinded by the lotus, it gives off such a nice vibe ;)

Kuro

Well... I'll give you that: you TRULY are GOOD in writing angst! I missed the mushy ending this time though...write some more happy ones?

Anyway, I believe I know a bit about Kanda and I didn't spy any true signs of OOCness - maybe the 'I wish to be with Lavi forever' could have been phrased a bit differently, but in the end you don't need to worry about it - you kept the characters themselves perfectly fine.

The concept was very beautiful - and heartwrenching. The bottles idea is just so...I'm not sure how to call it, somewhat dreamy in a sad way. Great idea.

Also, I can perfectly see Lenalee going with Kanda.

And finally, the interpretation on why the lotus field is bad. It's awesome and could full-well be true. It's like going blind just worse, because you do see something - something that reminds you of your upcoming death, and it's quite easy to go mad that way..

Great job! Looking forward to more from you dear~

Dem

i think that you mean to say that you tried to make kanda as IC as possible, right?
Well, on to the story: it was rather well done, even if Kanda was seriously OOC. I didn't mind too much, though. Anyway, it's a bit too short for any constructive review, so I'll just wait for the next chapter.
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There will be one, right?