wow...i have to admit. i like this story. continue it,please? i'll save it too...it's rare to find a good fic that has you wondering whats gonna happen,most are predictable. you did good,well, ja ne' i have noodles waiting for me and an brand new TV.

really good story
update soon

Great story so far ^o^ Would love to hear more from that. I even once thought about a similar storyline as well, but never wrote it^^°

I sense trouble brewing... Aoko, what are you doing?!! You're going to blow KID's identity wide open!! But you mean well, so I guess it's okay... sort of XD Can't wait for your next update!

I think Ekoda is an actual district in Tokyo if I'm not mistaken.

I know people have already pointed out Mouri smokes, but I wanted to add a tidbit to that, Mouri's smoking habit is actually what gave Kid away in the Sunset Mansion case...Kaito doesn't smoke.

Anyway, amusing antidotes aside, it's an interesting story...though you might want to brush up on you facts if you have to ask.

Oh yay! I love this story already. It has so much potential to be interesting, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

What will Kaito think when he realizes that the "detective-kun" has been hired to protect him? And I know that Conan will somehow fit the pieces together! Please update soon!

Aha~ I love it. X3 See ya next time!

the story set-up is very in-character for Aoko (and Kaito), and very intriguing! poor Kaito. little does he know how close his 'critic' is going to be . . . .

looking forward to this story!

gratefully,
db

Good chapter. Everyone seemed in character, and I love seeing the characters' reactions to, basically, their doubles. Your comment at the end makes me hopeful for a darker direction this fic could go in. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon! :)

I really like this idea of a story! XD
Please continue to update!

hohohohoho...kaito is so dead...ahahah...:D

Mouri is pretty much a chain smoker so no worries there. ^__^
Excellent characterizations. I really liked how you presented Conan's perceptions of Aoko's frame of mind and the bit with Ran and the picture was perfect. Poor Kaito, though! I wonder how long he'll be able to keep his secrets?

I thought Conan or Shin-chan would have some kind of ...theory about his doppelganger's bullet wounds, like some people like Gin in the Black Org. mistaking said person as him.Thus, made him a target because they had suspicions on the traitor Ai-san's confirmation that Shinichi is in fact, dead.

Ah well, it said to be 1:00 AM on my laptop and then 1:05 AM on clock just behind me so cheeros!

Actually, I don't recall Mouri ever smoking. Perhaps on occasion. But let met guess, B.O.'s in your story? :D Because Aoko won't ever be afraid of Kaito. Lol but Conan would love to find out Kaito Kid's identity and you gave him a perfect chance! ^.^