lol!! loved it

Oh my gosh I'm so sorry! That's abosolutley terrible! I'm gonna go find those sons of ** and they willbe so sorry they ever tookca SIP of alcohol!
R.I.P. Valerie
Sorry they kept getting her age wrong. That's just not right you know? I mean have some respect people!

I'm so very sorry sweetie for the loss of your friend. I wish there was something I can do to make this better for you. Please know that although we've never met, you are in my heart and in the hearts of many of your online family. Take your time and we will be waiting with open arms when you are come back to us when. I'm praing for you and and her family and hoping that you are given not only the strength to grieve for valerie but also the wisdom to know that even when the people we love leave us too soon, the love, joys, laughter, and sometimes tears (shared together in happiness, saddness, joy, and in humor )never leave us. Because you loved her, she gets to live forever.

Take care of you.

i'm so sorry to hear about your friend. it's okay that you don't want to write, i can wait.

~caitlin

omgosh! thats so sad. its okay that you dont want to write, i'll wait!

oh my god! this is my jam! LMAO!

OMFG! This story is so funny! You have to continue on with it! Looking forward to more chapters!:)

i loved this chapter! especially the yo mamma battle! that was hilarious1 i couldn't stop laughing

Aha, Emmett, the yo momma contest. Loved it!
And Mike has a youtbe account :P
cant wait for the next chapter!
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this is uber funny!

i know you probably have the last chapter all planned out, but could you maybe add jasper's revenge in? i've been waiting for it, but great story anyway!

LOL. Words do not express the funniness of this story. Keep writing! Peace!

~Eyes

lol! mike is such a party pooper

Edward in a tutu ^_^
Great chapter:P
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Love this. I really hope you can do an Alice Chronicles, because knowing her she could get in more trouble with Emmett as help, and we'd able to see what she is thinking. And I have to agree with Emmett about Mike...I have never heard a guy say outtie, only the realy preppy gossipy girls like Jessica and Lauren,

Okay this might be kinds stalkerish which is what I am not unless it is of taylor lautner hahaha but you know how you wrote about partyy boyy? Well is his name kevin? Cuz I had an experience at this one camp ( not exactly an experience but whatever lol) well so there are a bunch of kids that are together in this. camp and one of the girls is like to this one guy kevin "hey kevin, partyy boyy" and then he proceded to do the 'humping' movement hahahahha and immediatley thought of this story so yeah lol pm me and let me know.