I love it :)

Very cute :) I've always pictured Ryoma as an intense person(at least in love), so I really like the way you did this.. Keep up the good work!

OH MY! get well soon i hope she feels better

YAY! that was wonderful i'm glad it had ups and downs its kinda annoying when people just make it all romance and nothing happens but this was awesome it was like a real marriage! fav!

get well soon

i like how ryoma orchestrated the whole engagements and how obsess and possessive he his...
hope you can write something about it.. thanks..

Ouch.Is she okay? Hopefully...

I thought there wasn't going to be another chapter. But another chapter would be great. And tell her that she's a great writer =)

This is really good! I can feel Sakuno's jealousy while reading the story. Good job as always :)

good.

:)

nice story... really liked it... but sakuno should have made ryoma guilty a bit more... good job... great work!

LOVED IT!! :D :) :P XD

I didn't check the genre of this story when I read it, so when I first spotted this title I think it will be a romantic comedy. But I was so wrong!

I love your word of choice, it makes the story more vivid and easier to blend in. But since this a fanfic of Sakuno and Ryoma, I had hard time to imagine the situation in front me. In the end Sakuno and Ryoma went a bit OOC, but that's ok. Though I loved how it ended with Ryoma teasing Sakuno (something he probably will do if he ever get married to her, haha)

great fic!

Nice and deep. your have mastery over expressig your self with description. this is def one of my faves

Hey that was nice!
Citrus huh? *chuckle*
Beter luck for a lemon in the next one-shot
Keep writing ;D