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Reviews for: Ash and the Oni
jmc1295 7/17/08 . chapter 1
dude thats how pokemon should be!
Lyre Liar 1/6/06 . chapter 1
That was disturbingly funny '0.o
goth with a glave 10/19/03 . chapter 1
that was immensly STUPID, but funny as hell, man! poor pinhead has to spind eternety with ash -_-; o well least its not me _
lee-chan 6/2/01 . chapter 1
I liked it
Fireflwer 5/16/01 . chapter 1
Woohoo! Hilarous. Ash is reall a dumbass. I liked the part about Brock at the end.._ Brock rules. Except he marries ME of course-oops! Heh heh...errr, how did THAT come out? ahh screw Trace does is draw hentai pics of girls and then, hopefull, gets thrown in jail. ::grins evill::
Hysteria82 3/20/01 . chapter 1
Short and amusing. I loved the lines about tracey (all two of them ;)

-Lisa
anon 2/14/01 . chapter 1
This fic is hilarious! Mwahahahahaha!
Hypermon 2/8/01 . chapter 1
heh, weird. Good piece!
gameboyguru 10/28/00 . chapter 1
'What Tracey does' come to my fanfiction (Which I don't have any) And waits for his cue to DIE!
LadyArashi 9/9/00 . chapter 1
WAAAAHHH! Don't be so mean to Tracey! That was pretty stupid, too (your fic, I mean). How many times has something like this been done?
Pikabit 8/29/00 . chapter 1
OMG that is the funniest thing I have read all night! Write more! Please! Must... refrain... from waking... the family...
StarFox 7/31/00 . chapter 1
Yes! Ash has gone to hell! Now if only Tracy could go with him . . .
Gethsemane 7/31/00 . chapter 1
Sheesh! Alright then. Misty found Ash's pokemon and assumed he was dead. She pined away until she, too, died. They were reunited in hell where they could argue all eternity. FIN
Lily Andrews 7/31/00 . chapter 1
The Tracey parts where kinda funny, but MIsty & Gary? No...
GemKasumi 7/31/00 . chapter 1
*sweatdrops*That sucked,but next time put Tracey in Ash's place,and make Misty marry ?THEN it'll rule!LOL!
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