 thefullmetalAlchemistcayla 2009-12-04 . chapter 1O.O oh that was mean! hahaha but so funny, what sad thou I can see my hubby doing that to our kid someday >_> |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-28 . chapter 1“I’ll let you in on a little secret.” Vegeta said, coming over and sitting on the edge of Trunks’ bed. “I was in here earlier today, and I checked the place for monsters. I looked under the bed, and you know what I saw under there? Those movements and sounds that you are hearing… they are your hopes and dreams. They are down there jumping around, because they are so excited that they are going to meet you someday.”
I went Aw!, and when I read the ending I LOL. Vegeta come down and receive the greatest Father Award.
Great work. |
 TrinityTepes 2009-08-13 . chapter 1XD
As I it was coming towards the end I couldn't help but 'aw' when I was reading what Vegeta was saying about the hopes and dreams. But then I couldn't help but burst out laughing at the closet part! It was too funny. Love it. |
 dragonprincess3 2009-07-25 . chapter 1pfft... *snicker* dont laugh dont laugh dont laugh... BWAHAHAHAHA! GAHAHAHAHA! *king kai snort* HAHAHAHAAhahahahahaaha...*gasp* lol jeez... oh man. that was rich. new favorite vegita paragraph of all time. great job ^__~ |
 R0ck My Liife x3 2009-07-18 . chapter 1HAHA wow that was funny. What a great parent... The kid's afraid of monsters under his bed so to make him feel better, make him fear his closet. I will admit I laughed out loud at that one. |
 Arashe 2009-07-17 . chapter 1Vegeta is so mean XD |
 MikariStar 2009-07-07 . chapter 1I knew Vegeta wouldn't be that nice. The ending was hilarious. XD |
 Zhealy 2009-06-21 . chapter 1The fall is just super great!!
Vegeta talking about dreams and hopes is weird, and then, at the very end, we just have the TRUE Vegeta:: -)
Excellent One-shot
Thanks |
 xXuSaGiKiXx 2009-06-20 . chapter 1Oh, and one more thing. I looked in your closet too, and there is some scary shit in there. It’s infested with monsters. In fact, don’t even go near it. Good night" ROFL.Vegeta IS the best dad ever. |
 vegetaworshipper92 2009-06-07 . chapter 1Made me laugh so hard!! What a nice surprise ending!! I like how you played with the time gap between the Cell and Buu sagas. Gohan would totally go kick those monsters' butts! Vegeta, on the other hand... *giggles uncontrollably*. Super-cute, super-creative! |
 moonandstar331 2009-06-06 . chapter 1You had be going aw, right up untill Vegeta said that! But still a great one shot, you should add on, or do more Vegeta/Trunks father/son stuff! |
 notannounced 2009-06-01 . chapter 1made me laugh.
cute fic |
 divahahahaha 2009-05-30 . chapter 1lol at the ending! i didn't see that coming |
 ForbiddenCherryBlosom 2009-05-28 . chapter 1LOL absolutely great!! it was such a perfect father son moment! then vegeta had to be himself. |
 DBZ maineak 2009-05-28 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHA LMFAO! |