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thefullmetalAlchemistcayla
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
O.O oh that was mean! hahaha but so funny, what sad thou I can see my hubby doing that to our kid someday >_>
Itachi's aprentice
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
“I’ll let you in on a little secret.” Vegeta said, coming over and sitting on the edge of Trunks’ bed. “I was in here earlier today, and I checked the place for monsters. I looked under the bed, and you know what I saw under there? Those movements and sounds that you are hearing… they are your hopes and dreams. They are down there jumping around, because they are so excited that they are going to meet you someday.”

I went Aw!, and when I read the ending I LOL. Vegeta come down and receive the greatest Father Award.

Great work.
TrinityTepes
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
XD

As I it was coming towards the end I couldn't help but 'aw' when I was reading what Vegeta was saying about the hopes and dreams. But then I couldn't help but burst out laughing at the closet part! It was too funny. Love it.
dragonprincess3
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
pfft... *snicker* dont laugh dont laugh dont laugh... BWAHAHAHAHA! GAHAHAHAHA! *king kai snort* HAHAHAHAAhahahahahaaha...*gasp* lol jeez... oh man. that was rich. new favorite vegita paragraph of all time. great job ^__~
R0ck My Liife x3
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
HAHA wow that was funny. What a great parent... The kid's afraid of monsters under his bed so to make him feel better, make him fear his closet. I will admit I laughed out loud at that one.
Arashe
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
Vegeta is so mean XD
MikariStar
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
I knew Vegeta wouldn't be that nice. The ending was hilarious. XD
Zhealy
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
The fall is just super great!!

Vegeta talking about dreams and hopes is weird, and then, at the very end, we just have the TRUE Vegeta:: -)

Excellent One-shot

Thanks
xXuSaGiKiXx
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
Oh, and one more thing. I looked in your closet too, and there is some scary shit in there. It’s infested with monsters. In fact, don’t even go near it. Good night" ROFL.Vegeta IS the best dad ever.
vegetaworshipper92
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
Made me laugh so hard!! What a nice surprise ending!! I like how you played with the time gap between the Cell and Buu sagas. Gohan would totally go kick those monsters' butts! Vegeta, on the other hand... *giggles uncontrollably*. Super-cute, super-creative!
moonandstar331
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
You had be going aw, right up untill Vegeta said that! But still a great one shot, you should add on, or do more Vegeta/Trunks father/son stuff!
notannounced
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
made me laugh.
cute fic
divahahahaha
2009-05-30 . chapter 1
lol at the ending! i didn't see that coming
ForbiddenCherryBlosom
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
LOL absolutely great!! it was such a perfect father son moment! then vegeta had to be himself.
DBZ maineak
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHA LMFAO!
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