WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER? SORRY BOUT THE CAPS IM TOO LAZT TO TYPE THIS AGAIN WITHOUT THE CAPS.

I really like it! The best 'cast as kids' story I've seen in a long while

good story. are you going to finish it? can't wait to see what happens next

The second chapter was as great as the first one. Really love your style.
Just one thing, though: It's "Shepard", not "Shepherd" ;)

I really love this first chapter. Can't wait to read the next one. And I really hope you will continue the story after this. The idea is great. I've always seen Jenny&Gibbs as the team's parents and having that now in a slightly different way makes everything really interesting.

good story update!

Keep Going!

This should be interesting...

Update soon =)

Really great, worth the wait too! I like Ziva's appearance, clever :)

As always - loved the update! Esp Ziva's appearance, and the ending with Abby and McGee - cute :)

okay, honestly I didn't think you could do it, but you are.
You are somehow taking teen situations and fitting them in with the show very well
I have to say I'm impressed.

wow..this was definitely worth the wait..really love how you were able to work in conversations from kill ari part one and maybe two and still be able to retain the integrity of the story...loved it and now i'm curious as where ziva came from and why she is there...can't wait to read the next chapter!

Aww i love how u manged to introduce Ziva like they did in the ep it worked so well :-D

Ah, Ziva. :)
I love how you used the lines from the show. Very good.

Can't wait for the update.