More please? *Cute werewolf eyes*

Awesome :) Great job! :)

I like the ending, very poetic

More?

hohoho, bem escrito demais.

Hey I like the little story but I definately thibk u should start from the begginning and how J&S ended up together and carry the story from that point it has massive potential

love it. so nice ;) write more hehhehehehe ;)

Though it was short, it was delicious and wonderful, and I think the ending line is fabulous!

Cuteish.

IP

NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! WHY? WHY MUST THE WORLD BE SO CRUEL!

3 margo clearwater

Again, I love this concept- I never imagined a relationship like this in Twilight, but it seems like something which really could be very interesting. The only thing I'm a bit unsure of is the last line, and yet, at the same time, I don't know how it could be changed, so that's just stupid critizing you should probably ignore. Lol. Other than that, great!

heehee I just LOVE Seth Jacob... I guess I'm just a perv... It was great though!

Woah, that's an interesting pairing.

wait, so they're GAY? that's kinda gross, sorry 2 u weird people who like it

... that was wierd. I like that pairing though.