LOL! That was funny how Edward won't let her look up erect phalluses. I think you should extend the chapter ;P REMEMBER WHEN I GUESSED EXACTLY WHAT YOU WERE GOING TO DO BEFORE YOU TYPED IT!?!?!??! :O You better finish this~

OMG lmao that is hilarious! I wonder what she will do! Some one should be her model!

lmfao, this is hell-arious. You should od a two-shot. hahaha lawlz i swear, this definetly had me luaghing. Is Edward going to model for her? lmfao

Funny beginning !
Please hurry up with next chapter.

It is pretty funny and you should add more like maybe one of the Cullen boys being Bella's model?