 roku kyu 2/2/03 . chapter 2Okay, here I am as promised, back from vacation and a "recovery" week of jet lag. As you know, I know very little about CCS, but I will do the best I can. All right, I think you told me that Syaoran is Li, Sakura's best friend in the English dub.
I really like the way you depict the warm relationship between Dina and Xiao Lang - it's very sweet. I also like the contrast in the adult worries of Yelan and Jara. The hints of magic are also very intriguing, and you also do a good job of psychologically accounting for Dina's attachment to her cousin (death of her infant twin siblings, I think).
I'll be back when I have time to review upcoming chapters - but I skipped ahead to check out your AN, and see that you haven't continued this for a year. A shame, since this is shaping up to be a good storyline. Hopefully, inspiration will strike again this year.
Ja ne! |
 Admete Asterie 8/6/02 . chapter 1I'm reviewing this story wich I should have done awhile ago. _ This is a great story Star and though I haven't seen CCS (Though I will be soon _) You have told me enough about it for me to understand the plot of your story. Dina is a well, written out character. She is someone you can relate to, understand, and just love her antics. _ Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work girl. |
 mack 1/19/02 . chapter 8 it's good |
 Dusk-Magic13 1/6/02 . chapter 6!How sad is that?i liked your fic. Please get the next chapter up soon..._ Nefo-chan |
 max 1/5/02 . chapter 6 it's great |
 fanilia 1/5/02 . chapter 1Here I am and I have finished the first chapter, your writing style is very clean, I like it. |
 glen 12/31/01 . chapter 3 it's good so do more! |
 mAx 12/31/01 . chapter 2 it's good in every way |
 alex 12/31/01 . chapter 1 it's great so do more soon! please? |
 david waldrop 12/31/01 . chapter 4 more more more! it's great |
 bridy 12/29/01 . chapter 1 I love the story. It's so great. I keep wondering how Dia will make her apperenace in japen and if xiao lang will act the same way or if he will act cold and mean. Also why will dia go to japen. |
 Fyerbelle 12/28/01 . chapter 4Ah...this is really cute! Please continue! |
 david waldrop 12/26/01 . chapter 2 it's good |
 david waldrop 12/26/01 . chapter 3 more it's good good good. so more! please? |
 Captain Enor 12/25/01 . chapter 3Not bad. Not bad at all. This is some really good stuff. Keep it up! :-) |