It's funny to read. I can picture the scenes. You did a good job with all the characteres. Keep it up.

Hey, I think your story is nice. The plot is interesting.

The only suggestion I have is that when you're starting a line from a different character, you start another paragraph. It makes it a lot easier to read.

love it! so wanna read the next chapter!

your sis (lol)

-Sam

Haha I love Ethel xD

Loved that you used the term "candy apple red car" - just like my story about Corny Collins :D

yay a new Lucy story! i liked it.

oh and by the way, ricky isn't spelled with an e. (:

Your chapter is great!