|Reviews for New Car|
| Kryptonian54 12/29/09 . chapter 2
It's funny to read. I can picture the scenes. You did a good job with all the characteres. Keep it up.
| Trinity005 5/31/09 . chapter 2
Hey, I think your story is nice. The plot is interesting.
The only suggestion I have is that when you're starting a line from a different character, you start another paragraph. It makes it a lot easier to read.
| SamRox20 5/31/09 . chapter 2
love it! so wanna read the next chapter!
your sis (lol)
| xokaleigh 5/31/09 . chapter 2
Haha I love Ethel xD
Loved that you used the term "candy apple red car" - just like my story about Corny Collins :D
| xokaleigh 5/29/09 . chapter 1
yay a new Lucy story! i liked it.
oh and by the way, ricky isn't spelled with an e. (:
| LucyLove101 5/25/09 . chapter 1
Your chapter is great!