 Tarkonta 2009-08-19 . chapter 1this isnt smut...smut is forplay Lemon is sex Lime is hardcore. nice story. 1 question wouldnt Emmett's tongue have Venom thus putting it into Bella's bloodstream when he licked the wounds? |
 DanielaDany 2009-07-15 . chapter 1Oh, it was .. really good. I hope it was a dream :D I hate Bella with Emmett together. :D:D But pretty good. |
 brit 2009-07-10 . chapter 1 that was really good u should have finished tho it wouldve been even better finishd |
 Carlisle's Esme 2009-06-17 . chapter 1Never thought Em would be the rapist sort |
 lovethemall 2009-06-15 . chapter 1this is really good can you do more like this? |
 emmettismymonkeyman 2009-06-10 . chapter 1was it all a dream? or did that actually happen to bella, and why is it a rape-turned-pure lust story? |
 Mysterious Angel-05 2009-06-02 . chapter 1Pretty good. |
 debbie 2009-06-01 . chapter 1 and you said it wasn't really rape. she said no, taby! i liked it though. it was hot. i'd like a longer more detailed rapey one some day...starring jasper and bella. yeah, that'd be nice. btw, it took me forever to find this! there are so many twilight fics!! |
 xoxocullenluverxoxo 2009-05-29 . chapter 1this was kinda wierd and i wouldnt have read it cuz of the way emmett is portrayed but it was good none the less |
 loveingjacobforeverandever 2009-05-26 . chapter 1 hey different but im intrigued it would be great if u could update like now!!
lol keep it coming
xx |
 FAXfan 2009-05-24 . chapter 1wow. |
 MLynn1985 2009-05-24 . chapter 1Interesting. But "thrusted" isn't a word. Past tense of thrust is "thrust" |