That was good. Poor Gary though I do love him alot. Good job though. Please continue.

wow... dark...

*giggles*

Kawaii

Wish i could write like that! I'd love to see it continued, but it serves better as a short-one chapter fic.

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Keep it up and take care!

Ja ne

O_O

No, I just don't know what to say. This was so eloquent, so powerful, so beautiful! Much praise, my friend. Poor Gary. I love him.

10/10

o.o wow. I must say I was skeptical that anyone could do a dark pokemon fic before this. Masterfully done in my opinion, it'd be a shame not to continue it.

.Continue. you cant end it there...pleeeeease continue?

Ooh, I'm really into these Gary angst fics! Great!

I have to agree with the first person; that was a great insight on the character. And the wording, the thoughts... It all went together to make it right. I'm sick of stories about self-infliction and whatnot, where the author doesn't seem to have a clue what they're trying to say. This is great. Thanks for signing your review, cause now I have more stories to read! _

Not unrealistic... Genius! That is so amazingly insightful to Gary's character... Wow...