great chapter

good story so far keep up the good work

Thanks a lot for updating nice chapter update soon

First off, when a different character speaks, you're supposed to start a new paragraph. It's confusing the other way.
Secondly, there is no description! Just bare plot and storyline, and as interesting as that is, surely you can expand you story and not just have bad guys randomly show up without warning (and with the scouts just "happening" to know they're evil).

omg omg omg OMG PRIINCE DIAMOND I LLOVE THAT GUYY HE RULLES! Is he gonna have A big part in the story with Serena ??;p I hope so please update soon thanks

Great Story

great story i can't wait to read more update soon thxs :)

Great Story Plz Plz Update it soon

go for more!

i like it contiue plz i want to know what happens next